rate_review Reviews

It may have taken a while, but it was definately worth the wait!!!!!

I love that Lucius in now taking a turn at Hermoine. Apperantly all the MEN want her and all the BOYS are shit out of luck.

Desk sex is one of my favorites. Thank you for allowing Lucius the honor of 'taking' Hermoine on his very large, ostentatious desk. It was HOT and STEAMY!!!

Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter!?!?!?!

This was an EXCELLENT, EXCELLENT UPDATE... I loved the lemon in it, obviously... But it still makes me wonder what will happen between Arthur and Hermione... I just hope you wont make us wait so long for the next chapter, lol... heheheeeee, my greedy eyes want more story food, and you must feed them, lmao... for now, I think I'm going to go and re-read some of the earlier chapters...
*runs off*

Oh, almost forgot..........

I definitely think you should write more HG/AW stuff... I agree with your other fans... they are very underwritten, and you put them together very nicely... I love LM/HG & SS/HG and all, but I agree with 'koolgirl18' they need to kick Lucius, & Severus behinds and go make babies together... oh... but first he needs to divorce Molly... or, something... I'll leave that (and everything else of course) up to you...
I definitely think you are one of my favorite authors for fanfiction EVER!!!
I'll read everything, like the greedy witch I am, LMAO!!!

interesting story, i hope ron and hermoine become friends again, then she start to really worry that she lose him harry and ginny when they find out everthink

Merlin what a bastard!! I'm not going to lie though--I absolutely love Lucius Malfoy and wouldn't mind seeing a smut scene with them.

But at this point, I want Hermione and Arthur to kick Lucius' and Snape's ass and have babies together like they were meant to.

Thank you so much for the update--I'll follow like the lost puppy I am (I DEMAND a smut scene the next chapter) lol

Until next chapter

Love, hugs, and kisses
koolgirl18

Gah! Remarkable!!

Okay, I hate you for bringing Lucius into the mix and coming between poor Arthur and Hermione... but I love you for bringing Lucius into the mix, because he is one of my favorite older-wiz partners for her. It's just like when you brought Snape in... another excellent older-wiz partner.

Still, Arthur gets no love in ficworld (often, literally!) and I feel I must complain on his behalf here. Dammit, this is an HG/AW fic!!

That rant said, I still love ya, Remarkable, because you write so very well and capture characterization and nuance beautifully and excel at plot, pacing and straight-up porn. Keep writing! Go you!

Oh man oh man oh man I love this fic! I want Lucius and Snape to get his comeuppance and for Hermione and Arthur to be happy. PLease say this is going to happen!

No smut, but definatly implied for future chapters. I love this series.

OH.......... MY.......... GAWD..........
Um, I'm not quite sure what to say... You had better not let Lucius ruin things for Arthur,& Hermione... and especially don't let him become the Minister for Magic... he'd ruin poor Arthur... and thats just wrong...
But still... Very good chapter, & I soooo cannot wait for more!!!

Remarkable, I love you. I'm just saying...

Seriously, though, this fic gets better and better. Even though I nearly killed ya after the evil cliffie last chapter (and the long hiatus), this chapter makes up for it... and makes me want even more. And *that* is the sign of a good writer. That said, GET WRITING! We want more! lol