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for Lax in Memory

by SnuggleLove54

schedule October 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I can't wait to read more. :D
schedule October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Update soon! :) I love this, it's watching the two fall in love together again.
person Vengeance
schedule October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story! It's really great! But she will get her memory back, right? I want to see them living happily ever after! :D
Keep up the good work ;) And don't worry about taking long to update, it's normal to have too much to do for classes! And the chapter turned out great!
schedule October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! My heart is aching for Draco; I can't imagine how much he's hurting right now. And he's holding it all in for Hermione's sake. Aside from the plot line, which is great, this is really well written.

Really hoping for relatively regular updates!
schedule October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting premise, her struggles are something we can empathize with and not feeling forced. What does feel forced is her 'friends' giving her only 24 hours to come to terms with her upheaval. Their excuse that she 'can't hide' was horrible, I don't know if I was in her shoes if I regained my memory that I could ever forgive them for such selfish shortsightedness. Very sad. At least her husband gets that she needs a moment to take things in. Their reaction is somewhat the reason that real life people with memory loss sometimes reject family and friends, they feel pressured to love people and things they just have no basis for. I'm really interested in finding out how she deals with the pressure and also the kindness. Can't wait to see more.
schedule October 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know you said that this story has been done before, but I think you are doing an exceptional job. I love that everything takes place after the Deathly Hallows, and everyone is who they should REALLY be with ;-) (as in Draco and Hermione and I've always thought that Ron WOULD be good with Luna! Although I've never seen a Pansy/Seamus pairing I could get used to it ;-)). I liked the end of the third chapter and how Hermione is starting to open up to Draco a little. And I can't wait to see what happens when they go to visit his parents. I don't know if you've already written the chapter but I hope you keep the Malfoys how they were in the end of the Deathly Hallows, very family-oriented; they them being happy for Draco because he's happy. Can't wait for an update!

-A Mere Reader
person mag7ical
schedule October 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ouch, memory loss and pregnancy! Poor Hermione ... though Draco seems to really love her.
person Divinit
schedule October 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I must say I'm very pleased to have found a story here that obviously English is first language. I'm enjoying this very much so far, and like the gentle build up. Looking forward to fabulous updates!
person mag7ical
schedule October 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol, Hermione's friends with Pansy? Pansy's dating Seamus? Very unusual, but it works.
person mag7ical
schedule October 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I feel bad for both of them, being so awkward around each other. Him kissing her stomach was so sweet. You write Draco so adorably. I'm really liking the story so far ... it's well written and different from the other stories of this type. Hope you update soon!

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