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Loved the chapter it was amazing. Love the lenth and the details. I can not what to see what you have next.

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please update this again, soon?
i really love this!

I love how this story is going. You have the result of war as welll as the help for it. I just love it. I can't what to see what happens. My heart goes out to them all.

Interesting beginnings. You're doing an excellent job of showing the depths each character has as well as the love the family members has for each other. I expect that Albus will be visiting frequently; otherwise, I don't see how he could be bear to let them go without him. He's done all he can to keep them preoccupied. That is one character where there is method to his madness. I always felt the same about Luna as well. Occasionally authors assign a song they feel would go nicely to a given chapter. I feel an excellent song to illustrate the need for the family's move to begin fresh would be 'Steal Away' as sung by Celtic Thunder. The lyrics are perfect; and as a big fan of Celtic music, the men of Celtic Thunder do the song justice. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I swear...I just love this story more and more each time I read it! Love the insight into the intricate relationships between the kids. LOVE how you wrote Albus' character. Can't wait to read more. :)

Love love LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I must say I am happy that you have taken longer for Harry Potter & company to get to Forks. Usually it is like the first or second chapter which is quite disconcerting. I like that this is taking longer. Although I can't wait for them to get to Forks and meet everyone!!!! I am so excited. Really love you work, please keep it up and update soon!!!!!!!!!

Cool Story!! Please update again soon.

Thanks for answering my questions and please write more!

i love it