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AHHHH! CUTE!

I read this through - instead of working on my major project. Then it was like 4am and the silly servers made me play games (and do my project) THEN I KEPT READING! :D

Seriously, this is adorable and I will be checking back! I love that Draco has conflicting feelings. And ferris wheel! and and... why isn't there smut? xD

I was kind of (not so secretly hoping) that they were going to hook up! Hopefully this happens! :D

Please please please keep writing this great fic!

Also, side note: you keep spelling 'follow' wrong. follow not fallow. Otherwise, your grammar & spelling have been pretty great!~
-neko

So much happened in that chapter, but so little was resolved. Great job building the suspense. :-) I am worried about just about everyone, hoping Lucius gets his, aching for Hermione and Draco, and positively anguished over poor Tonks. Please update again soon. Thank you! HG4eva

I hate that they have to go through all this agony and fear, and I could cry at Lupin's death. I am glad though that Draco is growing and changing and that Hermione is slowly regaining her memories. I look forward to happier times and more of your story. Thank you, HG4eva

Update soon

GREAT beginning. I like the immediate reason for his change, although her suffering was hard to read. Very well written, but hard to read for obvious reasons. :-) I look forward to seeing him grow more and Hermione learn to love such a scarred young man. Looking forward to more soon, HG4eva

I particularly like the part where Hermione is drowning. I'm interested to see how she ended up drowning.

I enjoy the Violence. More?

More please! I like it.