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Wow, Harry is getting somewhere! *sighs in relieve*
I started thinking that all his work would be for nothing and that Draco and his parents were so bad (in this world, at least) that nobody would be willing to testify for them. But now I'm hopeful that they will survive at the end of the story. I really don't think Harry could cope with the feelings of loss and guilt if he couldn't safe his dream-Draco from execution... But prison is an other matter entirely...

I'm also curious what happens in the real world when Harry is dreaming, so far we only know that he feels refreshed... Good idea of Draco to try this in an, as he put it, 'controlled setting'. Although I'm sure Harry feels like a guinea pig^^

I think there would have to be something in that water to make Harry sleepy because a good massage won't put you out that easily. That was a little creepy like maybe Draco is hiding something.

about 9...

You know, I'm not sure if you meant to...but the AU
elder Malfoys seem comical in a way, but not in a bad way,
with the way they react to Harry. :-)

They are almost childish.

Hey, when was the last time you wrote a story where Harry
was the aggressive pursuer?

...or a story with a twist like 'Keep it simple stupid', which
I thought was clever.

about 8...

Yeah, can't wait to see how you pull off
the trial...and what Ri..er..Malfoy does
to get Harry to give in.

Man, it sucks to go somewhere else to read reviews.

But, I..as well as others..really appreciate the
acknowledgement. :-)

Omg, you are not the only one who knows the song Rico Suave. Lol. That was back when MTV played music videos. Then later MTV2 played music videos. Now...well that is what satellite radio and the Internet is for. However I am off the intended subject here. Another interesting chapter where one wonders what is Lucius playing at? Doesn't he at least want his heir to stand a chance? Hermione is so different but given how much of a dork Neville is in the AU, I can see why. Her boss is definitely sneaky though. Might she have been in Slytherin? I wonder if she was smart enough though for the House of Salazar. Given her predisposition regarding Death Eaters, she probably thinks they are all Dark Arts practitioners.

Great job!

So it starts^^ Harry begins to confuse the two worlds (at least a bit) and told Draco the truth. Nice touch to let it be Draco who hears the story first! Although Ron and Hermione probably will be pissed^^

about #7...

Part of me just wants to go..'Wooo!!! Go Draco!!!!
Rico Suave in full effect!!!' and the other part
is like...'Oh what the hell..' :-)

Is amazing how you're able to separate the two
Dracos into two personalities. One is a 'man of the
world' and the other still seems to maintain his
innocence.

It'll be interesting to see how this ends...

maybe Lucius is thinking he can throw Draco under the bus to get himself off

Splendorous! Tasted is indeed one of the best adjectives to use in that situation ;). Thank you for updating once more, please do so again when you have the opportunity.

Nice! Thanks for your dedicated work!

I really liked that Draco1 opened up. His silence and lack of background-information made me slightly suspicious^^
I also liked your reasoning for his actions. But I'm feeling a little torn: I can't decide which Draco I like more and, let's face it, there's only one Harry... Who's going to get him, I wonder? And won't Harry forever mourn the one he had to give up, eventually??

Your description of the other Ron and Hermione shocked me! I hope that they also find happiness in the end...