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November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 13:
Nora Potter wanting so badly to connect with another family member in the same way that Harry does makes my heart break a little. Is it possible that she exists in the real world somewhere, so far away that we wasn't noticable before? The bit about James and Lily dying when she was pregnant was... *sighs* more than a little hard to read. I loved the little bit with Draco at the end, so sweet and so promising. :)
Nora Potter wanting so badly to connect with another family member in the same way that Harry does makes my heart break a little. Is it possible that she exists in the real world somewhere, so far away that we wasn't noticable before? The bit about James and Lily dying when she was pregnant was... *sighs* more than a little hard to read. I loved the little bit with Draco at the end, so sweet and so promising. :)
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November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
About # 13...
As much as I enjoy the intrigue, WHEN will we see the
Return of Rico Suave? HE is fun and I like to see him
get one over Harry!
There's nothing like a flustered Harry.
As much as I enjoy the intrigue, WHEN will we see the
Return of Rico Suave? HE is fun and I like to see him
get one over Harry!
There's nothing like a flustered Harry.
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November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #12...
Uh...I know Harry is in an alternate world, BUT
shouldn't he correct Draco when someone calls him
a Muggleborn??? Isn't he 3/4 wizard? That's MORE than
half...and a basis for a new story. :-)
..and Ms. 'Dracula' sure loves playing hardball,
probably 'sucked' the joy out of things when she
was in school.
Uh...I know Harry is in an alternate world, BUT
shouldn't he correct Draco when someone calls him
a Muggleborn??? Isn't he 3/4 wizard? That's MORE than
half...and a basis for a new story. :-)
..and Ms. 'Dracula' sure loves playing hardball,
probably 'sucked' the joy out of things when she
was in school.
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November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12
That sonic boom you just heard was me exploding.
That sonic boom you just heard was me exploding.
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November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A red headed potter, could be his sister but if she's older then probably not. I think if Harry meets his parents, he'll have to realize it's all a dream.
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November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 11:
Hmm... Interesting. I wasn't sold on Draco's claim of the dreams being dangerous until this chapter. Now I'm convinced, curious and worried all at once. Who cast the curse, if indeed it is a curse, and why would they do it? Answers for later chapters that I look forward to. I like the man who can't be found except when he wants to be and how mysterious Lucius is with the details. I get the feeling that if Harry asked more specific questions he could learn some really interesting things from the Malfoys. The bit about Harry changing into the hero of the press made me smile because Draco said some of the things I wanted to yell at Harry.
Hmm... Interesting. I wasn't sold on Draco's claim of the dreams being dangerous until this chapter. Now I'm convinced, curious and worried all at once. Who cast the curse, if indeed it is a curse, and why would they do it? Answers for later chapters that I look forward to. I like the man who can't be found except when he wants to be and how mysterious Lucius is with the details. I get the feeling that if Harry asked more specific questions he could learn some really interesting things from the Malfoys. The bit about Harry changing into the hero of the press made me smile because Draco said some of the things I wanted to yell at Harry.
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November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about 11...
Po' Harry, he so cornfuzzled. :-(
Sooo...I take it if the other Harry was around, he
would have been able to SOMEthing about the dire
situation the AU Wizarding World is in and if I
know my Wizarding history good enough, it seems
like Voldemort actually picked the right family to
kill.
Because Neville is a loser with a capital L!
...and Harry needs to realize he can't have the
AU Draco.
Po' Harry, he so cornfuzzled. :-(
Sooo...I take it if the other Harry was around, he
would have been able to SOMEthing about the dire
situation the AU Wizarding World is in and if I
know my Wizarding history good enough, it seems
like Voldemort actually picked the right family to
kill.
Because Neville is a loser with a capital L!
...and Harry needs to realize he can't have the
AU Draco.
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November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Maybe Draco should rattle on Harry to Hermione. That would be insane.
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November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 10:
Ahh! I was really hoping that Harry wouldn't completely separate the two Dracos, especially now that he's chosen the one in his dreams! The Draco in the AU seems so much younger than the one in the real world and his relationship with Harry seems too much like that between a student and a teacher or a patient and a doctor-the balance between the two of them isn't quite right for what I usually think of with this pairing. I don't know if that was your intention or not but I really hope Harry grows up and picks the more mature version of Draco in his world. Then again, maybe you'll change my mind in the next chapter. :)
Ahh! I was really hoping that Harry wouldn't completely separate the two Dracos, especially now that he's chosen the one in his dreams! The Draco in the AU seems so much younger than the one in the real world and his relationship with Harry seems too much like that between a student and a teacher or a patient and a doctor-the balance between the two of them isn't quite right for what I usually think of with this pairing. I don't know if that was your intention or not but I really hope Harry grows up and picks the more mature version of Draco in his world. Then again, maybe you'll change my mind in the next chapter. :)
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November 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think that if Harry is the defense lawyer, he has the right to see all the evidence against the Malfoys, which so far he has not. I would be interested in what's there.