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December 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Harry poor stupid Harry. He really is dense.
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December 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, curious to know what it is that malfoy did. please update soon!!!!
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December 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter! And the cliffhanger of Malfoy's supposed stupidity is going to eat at me until we find out what it is, haha. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Also loving the frequent updates, please keep it up!! :D The way you keep me guessing and imagining the new plot lines that could appear is awesome, you've got a huuge fan!
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December 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #14...
1. Lucius played with his cane.
Oh, the fun one could have with that statment ALONE...and
you knew that. ;-]
2. You know Ms. Dis' spatula sounds almost like Umbridge,
hopefully without the Pepto Bismol look for fashion. Say DID
Umbridge wear pink in the book, I can't recall.
3. I have this reader fantasy that Harry will find out it IS
another universe, get into trouble [as usual] and somehow bring
in the big guns to help him out in said universe, like Granger,
Weasley and Malfoy.
But, that's a whole nuther story.
3. You know Malfoy acts cocky enough without the verbal
assurance that he ACTUALLY won Harry's hand.
4. By the way, saw the movie, think director Yates did a better
job THIS time around, the last 2 times he never did seem to get
what the HP universe was really about and couldn't feel the
'heart' of the story. Course few things were changed, but not
where it took away from what was really important...the hunt for
horcruxes.
1. Lucius played with his cane.
Oh, the fun one could have with that statment ALONE...and
you knew that. ;-]
2. You know Ms. Dis' spatula sounds almost like Umbridge,
hopefully without the Pepto Bismol look for fashion. Say DID
Umbridge wear pink in the book, I can't recall.
3. I have this reader fantasy that Harry will find out it IS
another universe, get into trouble [as usual] and somehow bring
in the big guns to help him out in said universe, like Granger,
Weasley and Malfoy.
But, that's a whole nuther story.
3. You know Malfoy acts cocky enough without the verbal
assurance that he ACTUALLY won Harry's hand.
4. By the way, saw the movie, think director Yates did a better
job THIS time around, the last 2 times he never did seem to get
what the HP universe was really about and couldn't feel the
'heart' of the story. Course few things were changed, but not
where it took away from what was really important...the hunt for
horcruxes.
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December 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 15:
The image of Draco Malfoy in bright orange Cannons robes is extremely amusing! Especially with this character! I really hope that works out for him, if only so I can chuckle some more. :D
Honesty instead of volatility, would have served Malfoy much better, I think. I didn't like to see Malfoy so hurt when he left but maybe now Harry will realize what he's be missing when it was right in front of him. I would much prefer the clear, striking eyes to the wide, adoring ones.
The image of Draco Malfoy in bright orange Cannons robes is extremely amusing! Especially with this character! I really hope that works out for him, if only so I can chuckle some more. :D
Honesty instead of volatility, would have served Malfoy much better, I think. I didn't like to see Malfoy so hurt when he left but maybe now Harry will realize what he's be missing when it was right in front of him. I would much prefer the clear, striking eyes to the wide, adoring ones.
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December 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #15....
1. Hmm...Rico Suave with a twist of lemon. It's
still all good. But his approach was way off, he
should have kept his mouth shut and maintained
the playfulness.
2. Will Harry make the right choice?
1. Hmm...Rico Suave with a twist of lemon. It's
still all good. But his approach was way off, he
should have kept his mouth shut and maintained
the playfulness.
2. Will Harry make the right choice?
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December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 14:
Woburn is so intriguing! There are so many things I want to know about him. Who is he really and what is his relationship with Lucius? Will he not also testify for Narcissa? How does he avoid being found except when he wants to be? What are the "other things" that he can sense about Harry besides when he is lying? Basically, I can't wait to hear more about him in future chapters and see some more verbal sparring matches.
Narcissa's emphasis on Evans was interesting to me. I'm not sure about he character in this story but I can imagine her having various wizarding geneologies memoried and being frustrated that she can't find a place for him in her knowledge if she knew about the Potters. Could she have known Lily Evans from school?
I'm also enjoying how volatile the relationship is between Harry and Draco is in the real world. My favourite H/D stories are those where they do address their shared history, at least in part. I'm glad they're getting to accept some of these things about each other in the real universe even when they're still running hot and cold.
Woburn is so intriguing! There are so many things I want to know about him. Who is he really and what is his relationship with Lucius? Will he not also testify for Narcissa? How does he avoid being found except when he wants to be? What are the "other things" that he can sense about Harry besides when he is lying? Basically, I can't wait to hear more about him in future chapters and see some more verbal sparring matches.
Narcissa's emphasis on Evans was interesting to me. I'm not sure about he character in this story but I can imagine her having various wizarding geneologies memoried and being frustrated that she can't find a place for him in her knowledge if she knew about the Potters. Could she have known Lily Evans from school?
I'm also enjoying how volatile the relationship is between Harry and Draco is in the real world. My favourite H/D stories are those where they do address their shared history, at least in part. I'm glad they're getting to accept some of these things about each other in the real universe even when they're still running hot and cold.
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November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, please update soon!!!!!
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November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love all of your stories, you're one of the few active Harry/Draco authors that I can't wait to see a new chapter from! I am excited to see how this story pans out, and I'm wondering how Harry is going to cope with real Draco versus 'dream' Draco, and if the two are somehow connected. Can't wait to see a new chapter!
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November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeah if Rita Skeeter is on Harry's side, he's definitely living in a fantasy world.