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December 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 18:
I'm not sure what to make of Ron's comments in the beginning of the chapter. It seems like he knows something that Harry doesn't that would help him but that he's not sure whether or not he should help Harry out by flat out telling him. Maybe because Harry is so used to the Ron in the real world telling him what's up all the time he didn't notice when this Ron was subtle, or maybe I'm reading into this too much.
I find the image of Hermione and Malfoy scribbling notes on clipboards while Harry sleeps and then putting there heads together in intellectual agruements while Harry pouts in his pyjamas absolutely hilarious! I would like to know what's going through Malfoy's mind as he watches Harry sleep... :D
I'm not sure what to make of Ron's comments in the beginning of the chapter. It seems like he knows something that Harry doesn't that would help him but that he's not sure whether or not he should help Harry out by flat out telling him. Maybe because Harry is so used to the Ron in the real world telling him what's up all the time he didn't notice when this Ron was subtle, or maybe I'm reading into this too much.
I find the image of Hermione and Malfoy scribbling notes on clipboards while Harry sleeps and then putting there heads together in intellectual agruements while Harry pouts in his pyjamas absolutely hilarious! I would like to know what's going through Malfoy's mind as he watches Harry sleep... :D
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December 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor delusional Harry. He still doesn't get that the people in his dreams aren't real. Though he has to sleep and so if he's gonna dream anyway he might as well do what makes him happy.
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December 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #18..
okay, there won't be any unforseen consequences from
them waking Harry abuptly will there?
okay, there won't be any unforseen consequences from
them waking Harry abuptly will there?
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December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 17:
This has nothing to do with anything in the story but I just wrote what was possibly the worst exam I've ever written and coming home to find this story updated was... well, it made my day a little more tolerable. Thank you for that.
I look forward to the ways that Malfoy will make himself a bit more dangerous. That sounds delicious!
This has nothing to do with anything in the story but I just wrote what was possibly the worst exam I've ever written and coming home to find this story updated was... well, it made my day a little more tolerable. Thank you for that.
I look forward to the ways that Malfoy will make himself a bit more dangerous. That sounds delicious!
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December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #17...
Man, talk about a twist in the plot..you just don't like
predictability do you? :-p
Soo...no more Rico Suave??? O_o
Man, talk about a twist in the plot..you just don't like
predictability do you? :-p
Soo...no more Rico Suave??? O_o
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December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think harry let Draco off way too easy. He cursed Harry, Harry could throw his butt in prison. I think he should have just said, "this is what your'e gonna do, now do it."
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December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing amazing story! So fascinating, I just love the contrasting Draco characters. I can't wait to read more!
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December 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhhh please please please update soon!!!!!!!!!
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December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 16:
Woah woah woah woah! Hold up! This is Malfoy's doing to begin with?!?! ...Good job there! I definately didn't see this coming even with the "something stupid". No wonder he feels so guilty! So much makes sense now! Haha! I love this ah-ha feeling! Thank you!
I have the feeling that this is one of those spells, like Nova Cupiditas, which has no counter. You'd think that the books with those spells would have things like "Think before you cast!" and "Don't cast drunk!" written in huge letters at the beginning so things like this didn't happen. I'm a bit surprised that this is the spell that Malfoy chose to cast. I've always thought that the two of them already compelled the other's attention starting right from their school days. It was the direction of that attention that I thought he might want to change. Maybe I'm missing an subtlety of the spell that isn't help in the direct Latin translation. Now I'm interested in how much of Malfoy is in Draco and if those parts they have in common can shift the focus of the spell from dreamDraco onto realityMalfoy.
Great job on this chapter!
Woah woah woah woah! Hold up! This is Malfoy's doing to begin with?!?! ...Good job there! I definately didn't see this coming even with the "something stupid". No wonder he feels so guilty! So much makes sense now! Haha! I love this ah-ha feeling! Thank you!
I have the feeling that this is one of those spells, like Nova Cupiditas, which has no counter. You'd think that the books with those spells would have things like "Think before you cast!" and "Don't cast drunk!" written in huge letters at the beginning so things like this didn't happen. I'm a bit surprised that this is the spell that Malfoy chose to cast. I've always thought that the two of them already compelled the other's attention starting right from their school days. It was the direction of that attention that I thought he might want to change. Maybe I'm missing an subtlety of the spell that isn't help in the direct Latin translation. Now I'm interested in how much of Malfoy is in Draco and if those parts they have in common can shift the focus of the spell from dreamDraco onto realityMalfoy.
Great job on this chapter!
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December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
poor draco (and use readers) I can't see this ending in sex since Harry really has every reason to dislike him (and really hasn't liked him much at all)