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for Sleepless

by Lomonaaeren

schedule February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE the way you write Harry and Draco dialogue! For instance, this really made me laugh:
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person Talltree-san
schedule February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG, what a shocker! (Everyone cue the gasps!) I did not see that coming XD!
person Polka dit
schedule February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahh Snape gave in too easy. But it is Harry's dream, he needs to take control of it and steer things his way.
person SParker
schedule January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about 23...

I KNEEEWWW it!!!! I knew it was Snape!

I knew it..I knew it..I knew it..I knew it..
I knew it..I knew it..I knew it..I knew it..
I kneeeew it!!! :-D

Thank you ladies and gentlemen! I'm done!!! *takes a bow*
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 23:

Snape! Interesting. I wonder, now that he knows that a son of Lily and James is alive will he feel the same obligation that he did in Harry's universe. He's still a bit of an unknown but I'm more willing to see him as an ally now. I hope that's really the case.

Poor Malfoy! Pooring out his heart just for Harry to shove it back in his face! It makes me really sad to see. I do understand Harry's side as well but I'm really hoping they can work something out soon.
person polka dot
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't foresee a happy ending here. Draco is definitely too pushy .
person SParker
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #22...

Gotta admit, Harry gave a decent speech, but
in all honesty, he's going to need a freakin' miracle.

..and i still think Woburn is Snape.
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 22:

That potion sounds like it has interesting posibilities. I'm curious as to what Harry will see of Malfoy from this connection. How is it decided who gets pulled into who's dream? I'm definitely looking forward to finding out who Woburn is and to hearing Malfoy's thoughts on the dream. I feel for Draco here but he must be able to see that his freedom has to come before he is able to influence as he wishes. To me he still seems rather childish.
person polka dot
schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well Discupla failed, she didn't get enough sob stories to make the jury cry. You gotta make em cry.Harry too has gotta run the Malfoy as a victim angle.
person SParker
schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #21..

Oooo..FINALLY!

So, if all is successful, will Malfoy meet Draco? :-) :-)
:-) :-)

Hope so...