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about #25...

Hunh..I've never heard of a condition where the sleeper chokes in
their sleep, THOUGH I know a sleeper can sleep wrong where they
obstruct airflow...hmm.

Man I wouldn't want to stay in a world where your blood really matters. It's getting more and more complicated as it goes.

So maybe the dream is an alternate universe and someone doesn't want Harry to leave...

I want to say, I absolutely *love* that you are involving Draco in Harry's past, and having Draco talk to Harry about how much Harry resembles James. In soo, soo many Harry/Draco fanfics, it's all about what Harry finds about Draco's past, and people make up all sorts of drama. But here you are handing us the pain of Harry's past that we know from Canon, and making Draco care about it, and be concerned over it...I love it. And you do a good job of making me understand where Harry is coming from, and also where Malfoy is coming from.

The realization about Woburn - wow! wow!

PLEASE UPDATE!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!

I just finished chapter 10.

Nooo!! I want Harry to like Malfoy, not Draco! Draco is like a child, and understandably so, but he just...he doesn't attract me like Malfoy does. He's like a child who needs taking care of, not...sexy. Not...appealing. Just...sad, and sweet, and cute, but...I wish Harry were into Malfoy more.

Argh! reading on...

Ahhhh! This is so exciting! I love it! I'm almost to the last chapter that's on here...but it couldn't be the end! So I must beg you - please, please, please update!!

This is so exciting! I love seeing Harry in action as a barrister! I love that Discipula is more and more intriguing, and Woburn. I love that we are seeing a side of Draco with a spine, instead of just a needy childish person. But I still want Harry to end up with Malfoy. I am excited to have seen new sides of Harry and Malfoy in the recent chapters. Harry's realizations about hismelf are very interesting...I wish he would pay more attention to himself and not have such a hero complex! Dying to see waht happens next, reading on...

My only question before I move onto a very intriguing second chapter and more...

Harry EVANS?? What? I guess I'll understand in time...

OMG! Ok sorry to come off as a squealing fanperson but I just LOVE how you are characterizing Harry and Draco. I like how you are showing how they've matured, but also they still have some of their same selves to them. I would say more but it is so late, I'm not sure I can be coherent...Malfoy is still mysterious, and charming, and sarcastic...Harry is still brave, and dense, and adorable...and together...!!! Your fic is getting me into H/D again, which I haven't read in a while, but it's an old love. I'm only on chapter 6, and the dream thing is intriguing, but what I really love is the H/D interactions. Not just the kiss (the first, oh it was hot! and now they're going to dinner!). The conflict, the mixed feelings, the passion, all that stuff that makes Harry/Draco so fabulous...it is in your fic, plus so much plot and mystery,waht with the dream and how you've bounced us beyond the last book (thank you for ignoring that DAMN epilogue!). so...kudos. Kudos. I love this!