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for Sleepless

by Lomonaaeren

person SParker
schedule February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #28..

It's good to see Harry ACTUALLY get a..handle on
the situation and come ahead for a change. Hope
he can maintain it.
person polka dot
schedule February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh Harry did a good bit of Slytherin work here. Kudos.
schedule February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH!!! I can't wait until the next chapter!!! Ahhh I loved that kiss!!! Poor Malfoy!!! This is so exciting!!
person SParker
schedule February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #27..

Boy, they were SOOO clinical in their hypothesis
about D. Malfoy's feelings and the 'howzits & whyzits'
of what he was feeling that I'm surprised he didn't
die of embarassment OR become outraged...though he
had to be clinical with them.
person polka dot
schedule February 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So Harry dozed but didn't fall into the dreams. I found that interesting and he also kissed Draco but wasn't too affected, so their future isn't looking bright.
person Minue
schedule February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
To be honest, as much as I love your stories normally, I really don't want Harry and Draco to get together in this one. First of all, Draco is an arrogant asshole. He cursed Harry with a curse that might kill him, and even if he did some things to make amends, he does not seem to regret it. In fact, everything he did only brought him closer to his goal - Harry. If Harry refused to work with him, he sulked. He is an utterly selfish bastard. Additionally, he is constantly bitching that Harry does not understand him and try to see his side. Well, if I was Harry, I would file a lawsuite against him and not ask him for help, least of all try to see his side. I don't understand how Hermione always takes Draco's side instead of Harry's. I mean, the guy CURSED Harry, because of his insane obsession. Hello? If at the end of this story Harry realizes he is in love with Draco and that ends the curse, that will be quite ridiculous. I kind of hope Harry will wake up and realize everything since chapter one was just one big nightmare.
schedule February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 27:

Soooo good!! But over so quickly! I can't imagine that the kiss did anything to dampen Malfoy's desire. I really hope he doesn't try anything stupid in the next chapter... This hour alone has me worried :S
person SParker
schedule February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #26..

I take it the title means, they are FINALLY going
to cross over that hurdle and meet each other half
way?
person polka dot
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Maybe Harry should just start pinching himself when he's dreaming. Works for me.
schedule February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so short! and no Malfoy! but hey, I am very happy that Harry has decided it isn't worth it to stay in the AU, and helping Hermione was awesome! Plus, t he choking thing? that is bad...but it certainly keeps me reading. =D

more please!