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by Lomonaaeren

person SP777
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #3...

Now, THIS was interesting!

I'm amazed how different you made both Dracos character-wise.
The first Draco seems like the Draco we know..young & still
inexperienced [in a way] and the alternate Draco is more adult,
refined and...restrained somewhat.

It'll be interesting to see how you put this together.

Oh, and loved Harry's moves on the broom and nice touch on
his catch.
person SP777
schedule October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #2...

1. Discipula??? O_o

Cooool!!! ^__^

2. ..and is it JUST me or was Draco flirting???

3. And no matter how much Harry tried to talk to them, no matter what he said, they wouldn
person anonanon
schedule October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
How intriguing! Please update this once more when you have the chance, this seems really interesting.....
person W
schedule October 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hm... these dreams are certainly interesting...

I wonder if the prejudices the Malfoys obviously have will prevent Harry from helping them at all. After all, pride is only worth so much when you're dead^^
And the real Draco (how am I supposed to call him? Draco 1 or the Quidditch-playing-one?) is really acting strange. I mean, this insult to Harry's figure (and I just know that it wasn't true at all!) seemed like he was relapsing into his old-school-self. Which Harry, by the way, doesn't seem to like at all. And wouldn't it be counterproductive for Dracos intentions -which seem to be sexual- when Harry is angry with him??

Ok, just one more question:
You said that Harry will have a realtionship with both Dracos. Wouldn't you (and Harry) consider that cheating, especially because they are so unlike each other??

As you can see, this story is a bit confusing for me. But I like the idea behind it and please: More soon? I really liked this chapter!
person W
schedule September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, yet another cool story!

I really have no idea where this story is leading, but after just one chapter that's ok^^ What I would like to know: Do the other people involved in the dreams (Neville or Draco) also have them or is it just Harry?
And WHY was Draco so strange in that alley? He seemed almost in love or obsessed with Harry... But perhaps that's just wistful thinking^^
person SP777
schedule September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
1. You know...I meant to ask this a long time ago of you,
I was wondering how is it you seem to have an affinity
for anything related to law enforcement or anything judicial.
You're involved in law of some sort, aren't you?

2. I was wondering how in the heck were you going to work
out ANOTHER story on alternate universes, but the twist is
welcome. :-)

So, from what I'm gathering Harry will get 'involved' with
both Dracos this time..romantically?
person Mehla_Seraphim
schedule September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so far. I like that you didn't start off with either Draco or Harry being totally annoying to the other. And Harry as a lawyer is interesting.

Also do you read your mail on your LJ? I'm sure your probably get a lot. I was just curious if my message went through.
person js
schedule September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yay another new story...looks good
uve got me hooked on another one
person paigeey07
schedule September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. Can't wait for more.