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for Sleepless

by Lomonaaeren

person polka dot
schedule October 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's like a wonderful life, only Harry wasn't about to jump off a bridge. I think Harry needs to see if he can throw Lucius under the bus and try to get the other two off. He's really irredeemable.
person SP777
schedule October 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #6...

1. Hah! You GO Malfoy! :-D

2. Okay..OKAY! Harry knows what he's doing...Ms. Dracula
isn't a snake, just a biatch and Draco Malfoy proved he
is Rico Suave. :-)

It's a song, if you're too young to know what I meant
by that or should I say you were too little at the
time it came out.

3. But I AM getting worried that I don't think Harry will
be able to present a convincing case with the Malfoys,
UNLESS he does some serious homework. I can see him saving
Draco and possibly Narcissa, but not Lucius.

4. ...and where IS the other Harry??? I know he HAS to be
living in the muggle world, that is IF he didn't meet the
same demise as his parents. Because personally the AU Ron
& Hermione need him...in a way.
schedule October 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Is it also likely that James Potter never existed in the dream world as well? Someone of the Order of the Phoenix would recognise James' familiar traits on Harry otherwise since they are practically lookalikes...

I enjoy the switch between the two worlds! Keeps me wondering about how Harry's doing with Quidditch player Draco and what's going on with imprisonned Draco. I wonder though, are the dreams going to create problems for him in his reality eventually? Won't he question more seriously why he's having those dreams? I wonder if he can get hurt in the dream... he assumes it's a dream and that he will be fine, but we don't really know for sure!! Keep updating, I love this story :)
schedule October 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm new here and this is the first story I've read... I'm in love with it. :) Please continue!
person polka dot
schedule October 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh Hermione's bitter, but I can see that. she definitely would have not had heroic tendencies without Harry around.
person SP777
schedule October 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #5...

Well now, me thinks Harry is about to hit a wall in
this alternate universe, hope he has headgear. Because
he still doesn't know what he is doing.

..and this Disculpa[???]..aww hell I'll just call her
Dracula from on...she reminds me of a freakin' snake.

ALSO, it is without a doubt...Malfoy is crushing on Harry.
person W
schedule October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You got me confused there... If the Malfoys are so uptight about their blood-purity and even willing to sacrifice their son, what does it take to convince them otherwise?? I'm at a loss there...

I just HOPE that Harry doesn't confuse his feelings for either Draco with the other. That would probably lead to misunderstandings and though we don't know what RL Draco really thinks or feels yet, I don't think he deserves to be liked or disliked for something he never did. Everybody deserves to be liked (or loved?) for who they are...

By the way, what happened to the dream-Harry? He has never been mentioned so far...
person Ritinha
schedule October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so curious about all this! Is the action in the "dream world" in the present time? or could it be that it already hapened? Maybe real Draco knows something about it.... oh, I really want to know! Great story so far*
person anonanon
schedule October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I'm surprised that Harry hasn't thought of his sleeping experience as travel to an alternate universe yet, what with the vividness of his experience and the lack of memory loss when it is over. It sounds like astral projection on a linear time-line reached through a single point of this consciousness. Am I getting warmer? Regardless, thank you for updating this wonderful story once more, please do so again when you have the chance.
person SP777
schedule October 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #4...

1. The Malfoy Deaf and Dumb Society...hello! :-)
That's too funny!

But I understand where Lucius is coming
from...staying true to yourself, without
losing who you are.

I wonder if Harry can get Malfoy to tell
him something that ONLY a Malfoy family
member would know...something in a latin
phrase or what a father would tell the son?

2. Will Harry in his 'infinite' wisdom...be
able to tell he's truly 'not in Kansas' anymore?

3. Is it just me or is the other Neville a complete
wimp??? Because I smell a conspiracy theory..and it stinks.