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for The Eraser

by torachick91

schedule October 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
How did I know that the white lion was gonna be Draco? lol I want more please!
person sanda
schedule October 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
whoa....smut so soon. lol. I choked on my beefaroni when i saw that. dont get me wrong, it was worth it. lol. I like the fact that it was ongoing. umm, meaning that it didn't jump to the fact that Black was there now. ya know? Thanks for the email. Appreciates it. I look forward to the next chapter. Really intense reviews don't build up until there are more chapters...then i can really get critical. *smiles* until then. Oh yea...longer is better but not to long but not to short. This length is a good but maybe a bit longer. that's just my opinion. I hate it when i starts going good then it ends adn you are like...ARGH!!! lol. but like i said. What floats your boat.
person sanda
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
EEEE SMUT! Lol, can't wait to see what happens next
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love it
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh, my assumption was right - the lion is draco.
update soon! i can't wait for your next update...
schedule September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, please write more. Is James really Harry and is bezerkers another name for Aurors oo are they something else?
schedule September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice flow, hope this gets continued! Please send update rougechet@gmail.com
person sanda
schedule September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
interesting start