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for The Eraser

by torachick91

schedule August 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

The really tiny print font is annoying as hell and it strains my eyes to read please make the typing actually big enough to see the story is good thanks

schedule December 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I have two little nitpicks about the first chapter. One is that "panther" is a rather generic term, in that it can refer to either species of the Panthera genus (usually the melanistic [black] varients thereof) leopards and jaguars, or it can refer to cougars (also commonly called mountain lions). If they're black big cats and aren't sure of their exact species, it'd be cool if they do turn out to be leopards (espeically if they're canon HP characters). 

The second nitpick is the fact that you have red and blue tigers in his group. All turned tigers are orange. If they're reds and a blue, they would have to be born tigers. Now, if I'm not mistaken the only other red tiger to have shown up originally came from a blue colony because the rest of his clan was killed off, so it wouldn't be impossible if these were part of an isolated tiger colony in the UK, likely mostly reds, and just don't know of another tiger colony to go to for help.

schedule June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting!
person Linds
schedule June 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!

Would love to see an update of this!!!!
person loretta537
schedule June 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i really love this story, i cant wait to see what happens at the zoo or later at night during the full moon
schedule June 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really love the story and I can't wait for more :)
schedule October 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
very cute story so far, a few spelling errors throughout, but nothing too terrible. i like the OCs you've created and i can't wait to see how everybody is going to wind up interacting, especially with the whole draco/harry and draco/anita thing. keep up the good work :)
person Leyla
schedule May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. could you please keep writting cause i would like to know what's going to happen next.
schedule March 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I rather liked this story. Please, update soon... Between you and me though, in the books, I find Anita rather annoying and I want to like her but I just feel for Asher you know???