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October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really love your writing, and I like this story a lot. I have never beta'd before, but I have descent spelling and grammar skills. You can email me at phoenix_bride@yahoo.com if you are interested in giving me a shot. I am online daily and usually have a couple hours each night that I can use editing. Keep up the great writing!
Phoenix Bride
Phoenix Bride
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October 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Now you are just trying to drive me crazy!?!?!?!
We know the 'mystery' man is not Snape. But WHO is it? Could it be Draco? I know it is not Ron, he is not romantic enough.
Hermoine already has feelings for Severus and he for her. But will the mystery man be too much of a pull on her heart. And what will happen to Snape, if she choses someone else? Will he spiral into darkness again? Would she allow that to happen?
So many questions!!
We know the 'mystery' man is not Snape. But WHO is it? Could it be Draco? I know it is not Ron, he is not romantic enough.
Hermoine already has feelings for Severus and he for her. But will the mystery man be too much of a pull on her heart. And what will happen to Snape, if she choses someone else? Will he spiral into darkness again? Would she allow that to happen?
So many questions!!
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October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I just wanted to say your story is awesome! If you are still looking for a beta, I volunteer! I'm not an official one, but my English teacher in high school used to have me edit essays because I did it better, no joke. If you don't want me to edit though, it's okay. Keep up the awesome writing regardless!
-Rayvenn T.
-Rayvenn T.
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October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
First...Thank you for Posting!!! I love your stories.
I thought Snape was the Mystery Man too?!?!?!?! Now, will there be another suduction in Hermoine's future?? Who will she choose? Will she have to make a choice?
Also, I loved that Hermoine was able to tease Severus about Albus telling him to keep his suduction down. That was too funny!
I thought Snape was the Mystery Man too?!?!?!?! Now, will there be another suduction in Hermoine's future?? Who will she choose? Will she have to make a choice?
Also, I loved that Hermoine was able to tease Severus about Albus telling him to keep his suduction down. That was too funny!
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October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Tinkerbell...you are such a TEASE!!!!
They are both SO close. The question is, who will get who first?
Please post soon!
They are both SO close. The question is, who will get who first?
Please post soon!
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October 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh so close... but no cigar!
You are a terribale tease. You only make me want more.
PLEASE, post soon.
You are a terribale tease. You only make me want more.
PLEASE, post soon.
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September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The teasing is becoming too much. I don't know how much more I can take!?!?!?!
More, please. And hurry!!!
More, please. And hurry!!!
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September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mystery abounds. Who is the secret admirer...Harry, Blaise, or maybe Lupin? Definatly not Ron. But is it Snape?!?!?
More, please!
More, please!
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September 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Now for the games!!! On to the SMUT!!
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September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
More, more...you can not leave us haning like this!!!
What devilish plan does Severus have for our sweet little Hermoine. I hope that it is something truely WICKED!
What devilish plan does Severus have for our sweet little Hermoine. I hope that it is something truely WICKED!