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March 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
More please. :)
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July 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is so good!
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June 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Looking foreward to more.
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March 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good update. I am also curious as to what the surprise might be. Since they are mated I thought for a second that there might be a ring, but who knows. I hope you will update again soon please.
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March 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am liking this story a lot so far. There are a few things I would like to point out. I understand you are looking for a beta but I figured there were some simple things I could help you with right now.
You keep saying "ow" when you mean "ah" or "oh." Ow is like "ow, that hurt."
Also, you keep putting "hearth" when you mean "heart."
Now, normally I do not offer to beta. But I like this story, so if you are still in need of one, you can message me in the forums, my name is Astraea and we will discuss it.
You keep saying "ow" when you mean "ah" or "oh." Ow is like "ow, that hurt."
Also, you keep putting "hearth" when you mean "heart."
Now, normally I do not offer to beta. But I like this story, so if you are still in need of one, you can message me in the forums, my name is Astraea and we will discuss it.
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March 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
awww cant wait to read more
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March 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aw that is sooo sweet. I can't wait for another update.
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March 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I knew it would be Sev. Even though it's not mentioned. Loving this. Hope more is to come soon please.
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March 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i think i missed something...it is Snape thats the fox...right? i thought itd be hott to have Lupin but i like him better anyway....but did i miss something or wasn't it put in there????!!!!!!
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July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've read this story here before but under another author's name. Are you the same one and just reposting it because you changed your name?