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For the love of god, please update soon! Two weeks! Too long! I want to see more of this story!! :( Pleeeease hurry? I offer cupcakes and brooooownie points! ;D

Plasce update soon get wait for the next chapter

I am Hooked....and anyone who is hooked on a good story...well needless to say I want more. This is brilliant and I can't wait for more and please keep it going please

brilliant and I can't wait for more

ok still confused here. I think that Sev is moving way too fast. Really so far Sev only said that he wants harry to be polite and well mannered. Sev really never explain to Harry how this works and it reads to me that Harry has no say in his "new" life. I do think that you made Harry's punishment a bit long and harsh. First punishment of Sub's should not be harsh (depending on the rule that was broken). Since Harry didn't understand the rules cause Sev didn't explain them. Harry should not have been punished harshly. I can not stress this enough in Dom/Sub relationships it is agreed upon by both parties. Harry refused in Ch 1 and was forced into this. I know that you have a rape warning up there as well. Again if Sev rapes Harry this is wrong. Sev is in the role to protect and provide not treat harshly or rape.
I did see that you have Sev praising Harry about taking his punishment. That was very well done, one should always praise a Sub when they are doing right. Punishment is about correction not pain (I think the bar was a bit too far in the punishment).
Don't get me wrong I do like the story, but you have taken all rights away from Harry all Sub's have rights.
Thank you
LadyNightVamp

good story

i thought at first by the first chap that i wouldnt like it all much but i actually do and cant wait for the next chap.

thanks for updating!!!

i really liked the chapter ^^, its so intense i love Severus and Harry together

Harry really knows how to get himself in trouble? C: its cute to know that Severus will take care of everything for him its like his a baby with the pacifier and all those things C:

can't wait for the next chapter

So glad you are here. Keep up the good work.

good chapter! the first part was funny. i can just picture harry sitting there surrounded by girls and being given a spa-like treatment. only thing missing was if they had wanted to put cucumbers on his eyes...

thank god that severus didn't have sex with harry during his punishment. probably would have made harry think that sex equals punishment and i imagine that while that combination could happen in the future, it would just make things much worse at the moment.

saw the non-con warning... i do hope that severus isn't going to rape harry. they (aff) should have a warning available for dubious consent, 'cause that would fit this fic as it is so far much better than non-con.

i look forward to the next update!