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December 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and would love for you to update soon.
I have to say I disagree with ladynightvamp's (or whatever the penname was) assessment about sub/dom relationships. The fact is, they aren't always perfect. I think you're portraying this wonderfully; of course severus isn't going to give harry a safe word or give him any control at all - that's not what he (severus) wants to do! he wants TOTAL dominion, and he can have it because harry didn't enter this relationship on an equal ground. Harry doesn't have the option of leaving severus or walking away so severus can do whatever the hell he likes, safe word or no. Therefore, harry has to adapt to survive.
I think you have the right idea and you write the dynamics of their relationship perfectly for the scenario it's in.
Well done, keep it up :)
I have to say I disagree with ladynightvamp's (or whatever the penname was) assessment about sub/dom relationships. The fact is, they aren't always perfect. I think you're portraying this wonderfully; of course severus isn't going to give harry a safe word or give him any control at all - that's not what he (severus) wants to do! he wants TOTAL dominion, and he can have it because harry didn't enter this relationship on an equal ground. Harry doesn't have the option of leaving severus or walking away so severus can do whatever the hell he likes, safe word or no. Therefore, harry has to adapt to survive.
I think you have the right idea and you write the dynamics of their relationship perfectly for the scenario it's in.
Well done, keep it up :)
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December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love this fic. Can't wait for the update. Is Dumbles bad or simple doing his for the greater good bull?
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December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! I feel that after 3 years of reading fanfiction I have finally found the one story I have been looking for the entire time (although I have read many other great stories!)!!! I love how Severus locks all of the doors just to control Harry and how Harry is slowly realizing that what Severus is giving him is what he's always wanted! Such great plot and characters! Please update soon! I cannot wait to read more!
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November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, i love this story
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November 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's really good. Please update soon... CANT WEIT FOR MORE
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November 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Love the story so far. I found it yesterday and I can't wait for more! Please update soon!
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November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the chapter. Especially where Severus comforts Harry. I can't wait to see what the next chapter has in it.
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November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the chapter. It's really good. Please update soon...
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October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fic and I would really like to read more. Though it did seem rather evil of snape to prevent Harry from growing! Maybe Snape will ask for (demand) reciprication. Please update soon!
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October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just checking in, hoping to see more of your writing. Keep up the good work.