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I really like this story! When is the next chapters coming out?

I know this story is really old, but I hope you one day come back and finish it! 

i love this story!!!! i love everything about it the plot, how sev is with harry and how insecure harry is and cant wait to see more from this story!! please please update i beg of you :D

This story is rather confusing to me.
Snape should have explained every rule and every aspect of their relationship before ever punishing Harry for anything, for example when he was punished the first time for touching Snape.
I see that you have used the term rape and non con to describe the contents of this fic, but a good dominant doesn't rape his submissive.

However, this whole teddy bear business seems to be the equivalent of constantly giving your sub a tranquiliser (if this story was to take place in a non-magical world), which obviosuly leads to a drug addiction. And I don't understand how anybody could want that for their sub, it clearly isn't in the sub's best interest and a good dom should always have the best interest of his or her sub in mind.

To me there is a big difference between a dom-sub and an abusive relationship. You however seem to be blurring these lines in this story...

more???

Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!

Please update soon. I really like read more. it's be sooooooooooooo long since you update. So please update.... please.

this story is great, i cant remember that last time i have enjoyed a story so much, i really hope that there is more to come!!!

I hope you continue this!!!

Brilliant fic :) I don't suppose it's going to update again? Looks like it hasn't for a while...