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Awesome chapter! Please update asap!! I really want to see them get together, and for the true Hermione to return!

Please update again today!! I can't wait to see how he reacts to this news.

Y' know, in some ways this reminds me of Dante's 'Inferno': Hermione has entered a world where a specific condition is required and has acquired a guide to take her through her observations of these varying levels of both pleasure and pain. Lucky wench.

I really like this story! I think that the writing might be a little hard for some people to read. Some suggestions I have, as I've done some Beta work is that you could always go back and reread your chapters before you upload them, to see where you need to put more commas in. You have a lot of thoughts that are run together, and commas help you separate them. Commas also help where a character's inner thoughts start and end. You can also use them where a character would take a breath when they are speaking. Also, a character's hidden thoughts read better when they are separated by single apostrophes on either side, and put in italics. I hope these suggestions help you and make it easier for others to read your amazing work.

I agree with the previous reviewer that Hermione's professor is a real prick. It sounds like he was using that class for his personal dating service, and since she was a virgin, he didn't want anything to do with her.

I have to wonder about the club and most of her acquaintances too. Ginny (supposedly her best friend) is working there, and Hermione didn't know? And why didn't they all want Hermione there to begin with? If she's such a prude, why didn't they try to initiate her sooner into that type of lifestyle? Better yet, how can they even say they're her friends? What is left to have in common? She didn't want in the Wizarding world anymore, she didn't want to have loose morals like it seems all her friends - including Severus have...it's like the Roman Empire! Like, when's Caligula coming out?

I'm going to keep reading, because I'm on Hermione's side so far. I don't think you have to be a slut (male or female) to understand your sexuality, or be naughty and open to new sexual experiences in private.

Wow, this is a great story. I do hope you finish it soon as I was really enjoying it.
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Cosmyk

Just finished reading the first six chapters. Not bad at all! However, I was a little confused in Ch. six--Clint is a serial rapist and murderer? How did Harry know this? It wasn't clearly set out, merely that he was after Hermione and was drunk. It made an interesting twist, since that would certainly be a class to attract such a jerk, but I was still a little off-balance. Also, Hermione's professor is a self-serving jerk. What, only the students he plans to have sex with get invited? Thanks and waiting for more!

please update soon!

Uh Oh, I can't believe Ron would be stupid enough to approach Hermione - even if it's in a public place. That ought to be some great fireworks!

An interesting and intriguing beginning. I look forward to more soon. Thank you! HG4eva

Hi! I just read the first two chapters. I thought it was a good beginning and I am curious as to where it will be going from here. I'm looking forward to seeing Severus Snape teaching the ever diligent Miss Granger about her sexuality.


P.S. Just thought you'd like to know that you don't need to place a period in the spelling of the title of Miss as in Miss Granger. If it were Ms. or Mrs., then it would be required.

Hope to be reading more of this story soon!