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by ronsmistress

schedule November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SOOOO GOOD!!!!! i never really thought much about a Ron/Pansy pairing but you can believe its now one of my faves, please write more involving this pairing.
schedule November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I do like that Ron and Pansy are both strong and not victims here. I also like that you don't bash golden showers, and that although Mark is deranged and probably should be prosecuted (he threw her on the floor!), there is more than one way to handle the situation. I'm not so keen on the last chapter, since Pansy's permission wasn't obtained for the first photo, and Colin's involvement is just kinda creepy. I like the slow development of the relationship and the portrayal of Ron's family at the bureau. I also like the plotline bits involving the waitress and Harry cracking up and acting unprofessional at Ron's place.
schedule November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE you!!!! *lol* Sorry that must have been said. Your stories are fantastic and i can't get enhough, don't know how often i have read them, but everyone is a classic and soooooooo fantastic!
Please more of Ron and Pansy i love them
schedule October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fun and sexy as hell. Thank you! HG4eva
schedule October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It happened again. Chapter 7 is incomplete. Which is a real bummer, let me tell you as I really wanted to know what was going to happen to that bum Mark. try to fix it when you can, okay?
person Vengeance
schedule October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
the chapter is incomplete... But I loved the story anyway! Thanks for updating!
schedule October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi. Just thought to let you know that your 5th chapter didn't upload completely. There wasn't enough there to review, but the four chapters before that were good.
schedule October 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

Im an avid fan of all of your stories! Although Ive noticed that you havent been updating as frequently as normal. Its a little bit upsetting as your stories are the usual highlight of my day!

I was wondering when you were next planning on updating and if your doing okay in the real world.

Look forward to hearing from you soon!
Cheers
schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YEEEEEEEESSSSSSSS!!!!!!! *scream*

I have waited for soooo long to read a new godd, no brilliant story from you and now i've seen a new one and one i like so much. You are a giftet writer to me and i can the scenes see in my head how you discribe them.
And the part where Ron is bound is one of my favourites. I like it if a women takes control and gives orders. *g*
What i would like to experience myself is, i know it's impossible but, to change with a women the bodies.
Hope i'm not bothering you.
Please write MORE!!!!!!!!

Beast (Patrick)
schedule September 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
SO happy to see another Pansy/Ron story from you! This one is super hot so far, can't wait to read the rest :)