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for A Long Lost Treasure

by hanenotsuki

schedule September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great story so far :) I can't wait to read more. Please update soon ^^
schedule September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
like the chapter and wonder how did hermione got harry phone number and also i would love to see an M-preg as well. can't wait for the next update.
person Everwhen
schedule September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome! One of the best starting chapters I've read in a long time.
Really hoping you keep up the brilliant writing! Please?
person Anon
schedule September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This looks pretty good so far, looking forward to another chapter soon. Your OC sounds.. dragonish if I ahd to guess :)

Also jsut thought I'd point out, if it's gonna be your OC/Harry, than this should really be in the 'HP Canon Characters paired with Original Characters' section, though you're more likely to get readers here, so who really cares.
schedule September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting beginning. Liked the idea of Hermione using the (muggle) phone to reach Harry when magic didn't work. Certainly looking forward for more. Thanks for sharing!
schedule September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the idea of the story... The first chapter was very good and I can't wait to find out more... Is this story going to be an mpreg story? I would love it to be an mpreg story... Hope you update soon
schedule September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It seems like it'll be good. Can't wait to see what you write. I like mpreg. just thought I'd tell you. So if you can put it in your story I'd love to read it.