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for Goodbye Alice in Wonderland

by windy

person Anna Doherty
schedule March 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story I hope that you decide to continue working on it. Anna
person Miss Madi
schedule January 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Good Fic, I like it!
For when is the chapter 23?
person starr
schedule April 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
so good and no updates !!!!! too bad :(:(:(:(:((:(:(:(
person Pete
schedule July 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a very well done plot, and it affords the players the opportunity to go back and correct mistakes they made the first time, which is fascinating to see.
Writing is well done, I'd say overall a very good job! I see a career in writing ahead!
schedule January 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Woot I finally caught up with the story.
I'm really liking it.
Although at times I'm surprised people aren't a little more suspicious of Harry.
Oh I was also wondering, you might have said it in the story and I just am forgetting, but how is Harry leaving school grounds when it is not a holiday?
Besides that I do wonder who you have planned for Sirius to end up with and Snape too.
I can't wait to read more so post more asap :D
person ChaosLady
schedule December 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's been so long since you updated that I had to read the previous chapter in order to remember where you left off. It was excellent!
person Sara
schedule December 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So pleased to have found this fic. Love it SOO much! Hope you have a happy holiday :)
person mihoshi
schedule October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I must say I really enjoyed reading a story so far. I love how harry figures out a way to actually spend time with lucious in his adult form. keep up the great work and I can't wait to see what happens in the coming to years.
person Saphirephoenix
schedule July 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is my favorite of your stories and I am very glad that you are updating again. I adore how you don't make Lucius a hero; he is still a ruthless bastard, but he is a ruthless bastard in love.
person ChaosLady
schedule July 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's been so long since you updated this that I had to read the last two chapter in order to remember where I left off. It was excellent thought!