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for The Fantasy Book

by CryingCinderella

person Mary
schedule December 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you tease... the long waited update and you leave me waiting for more!... dang!
person catysmom
schedule December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Please update soon.
person drakaina
schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn! I wanna know what Severus does about the book!!!! It's a fantastic story, thank you for writing.
schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay... so I have been waiting patiently... WHERE is the next chapter? I am SOOO ready to see what Severus has to say!!! Or more importantly, do to his little caretaker! PLEASE update soon! I am liking this story so very much!
person rox4787
schedule November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love it cant wait 2 read more please please please please please please please please update soon always look froward 2 reading this story
person loisa
schedule November 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
aaaah the chapter was too short :( but it built up the anticipation for when Hermione gets confronted by Snape. Update soon :)
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. So that's how it all started? Well, I hope that he's not too... Harsh with her. But I wonder if he'll either be reading one of her fantasies when she arrives or if he'll inquire about the book itself and torture her a bit by reading one of the passages aloud, or if he'll just toss her on the bed. Heh, okay last option not likely. Still, well done chapter. I'm eagerly awaiting the next! Please let it come sooner than this last one!
person use2b2t2
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Such a tease. But well written. Waiting for more.

Mare
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AHH no! evil..hoping next chapter is out soonish~ pls need to know his reaction
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I bow before the mistress of viciously anticipatory cliff hangers!!! Not worthy, not worthy!! I'm nearly as nervous as Hermione as to what will transpire in those dungeons.