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September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Cinderella this to soo HOT! The possiblilites for more graphic fantasies are endless.
I am hoping that one of Hermoine's fantasies is a true SUBMITION fantasy. While Severus always seems to "take her", it would be interesting to have her admit to a fantasy where she is the slave/submissive and he the Master; making her do things that she would be afraid to admit to. I think that Severus should have a physical reaction to her fantasies; while still in the coma.
But that is just MY Fantasy ;) !!!
Please continue...SOON!!
I am hoping that one of Hermoine's fantasies is a true SUBMITION fantasy. While Severus always seems to "take her", it would be interesting to have her admit to a fantasy where she is the slave/submissive and he the Master; making her do things that she would be afraid to admit to. I think that Severus should have a physical reaction to her fantasies; while still in the coma.
But that is just MY Fantasy ;) !!!
Please continue...SOON!!
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September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to tell you that I think that this story is amazing. It's well written and doesn't fall in to any clich
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September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Each fantasy gets better by the minute! I'm loving this. I wonder if he's beginning to respond, though. Perhaps he's playing possum a bit? There is such a thing as feigned coma, but regardless, I hope he wakes up soon to make her fantasies reality.
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September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is Hot! Love the visuals. Here's my request: How about a trip on the Hogwarts Express? A-la Risky Business.
Hmmm I think I have chocolate ice cream in the freezer.... Update soon please! Celest
Hmmm I think I have chocolate ice cream in the freezer.... Update soon please! Celest
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September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm really loving this story! Keep up the good work :D
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September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great Story, If that doesn't wake him up I don't know what will. HOpe for an update soon and for your other stories as well.
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September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Now, I'm seeing her have to complete a late night assignment by Sinastra on the Astronomy tower and being interrupted. ;-) Thank you again! HG4eva
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September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. Your writing is getting better and better. Hermione's fantasy flight was very hot with great visual description. Can't wait for the next one.
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September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was delicious! I loved his passionate way of teaching her to dance. ;-) And, I really like the fantasy ideas you've come up with so far. I hope you have one where she fantasizes herself on their wedding night to put that idea in his head, too. lol I don't want the story to end too son, but I really look forward to his reaction when he does wake up and realize all of those fantasies could be made real. Thanks! HG4eva
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September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excuse me while a get a glass of cold water ....Phew, that's better. Ok, Dancing With the Stars starts a new season soon and this chapter will definitely add a new dimension. Maybe a second glass of water will help. Oh bugger, I'll just take a cold shower and be done with it.