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by CryingCinderella

person Mary
schedule October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chanpter and evil pause... hope to read more soon!
schedule October 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AAAAHHHHH!!! Bad, bad author! I mean really....that's just plain ole...mean.

On another note, could Sev try to bargain his way to freedom? Is there a game of BS in the future?(think PotC) What could he offer the captain as stakes for said bargain? Why does this sound like a chapter teaser?

*Snaps finger impatiently* Hurry along please ;) Celest
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like that Hermoine has moved them to the tub. Now naked flesh against naked flesh (hot)!!

But I must say that you are cruel to leave us like this. Please post more of the fantasy soon.

Now that Severus has "smiled" at her fantasies, I wonder if other parts of his body will respond too (naughty thoughts here)!?!?!?!

Would like to see (or read) about Hermoine being Severus' slave, if you are of a mind to do so.
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved the idea of the bath and I look forward to more of this buccaneer adventure! Thanks, HG4eva
schedule September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think that Snape has finally awoken, but is pleased with the situation.

I think he just wants to hear more of Hermoine's fantasies...as do all of your readers!!!!
schedule September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Still loving it. And, brava for another deliciously wonderful chapter. :-) Thanks, HG4eva
person Addicting Writer
schedule September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would like for some pirate themed fantasies. Like Snape is a rogue pirate who kidnaps Hermione the governess daughter. I know it sounds cliche but I think that would be from Hermione's earlier fantasies.
person sandlapper
schedule September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another gorgeous fantasy! *fans self a lot! How about a fantasy consisting of gathering potions ingredients, an unexpected blizzard, a cave, and oh my, how will we keep warm because warming charms only work so well and that fire isn't really all that big!! Update soon!! The wait is killing me!
person jeejee
schedule September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story!
And as much as I love her fantasy book, I really want that to be her reality too.. When oh when will our sleeping sexy man awaken from his slumber, surely the smile at the end of this chapter is an indication that he is soon to rouse from his deep sleep?

Ahhh you keep me in suspense!
Keep up the great work!
person krivendell
schedule September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What if they bumped into each other at a club?