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October 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! The story was great and then the handjob was just icing on the cake.
But now, he is AWAKE...and he has the book!?!?!?!?!? What will happen next? He has awoken, he is naked in bed with remnants of the handjob on the sheets, and she has on nothing but a towel.
What a cliff hanger! Please, I can not breath from the anticipation.
But now, he is AWAKE...and he has the book!?!?!?!?!? What will happen next? He has awoken, he is naked in bed with remnants of the handjob on the sheets, and she has on nothing but a towel.
What a cliff hanger! Please, I can not breath from the anticipation.
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October 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! YAY!! He's awake!! Can't wait to see what Severus has to say about this...
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October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! One fantasy is better than the next! I want Severus to wake up and show Hermione just how much her tender loving care is appreciated! More please!
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October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! So I was thinking....what if she writes a fantasy about a time when Severus is in a coma, and she just hops on him and does the nasty! And then, right when she orgasms, he wakes up. Maybe, in real Hermione-Snape time, he really would wake up! How cool would that be. Anyway, I'm loving the story. I just wish you would write more often! It's hard to wait on stuff this good.
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October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Quite a little dominance fantasy that was. She was managed and punished and pleasured all in one short chapter. Maybe he didn't react because he enjoys the pleasure fantasies with them on even footing more than the ones where he is her teacher and punishing her. hmmmm Thanks, hon! HG4eva
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October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The library story was great! still fanning my face too much heat. Perhaps Severus responds better to descriptions of him been in the receiving end? Or when he is not in control? don't they say that those who have a controlling personality secretely desire to be controlled. Maybe i mentioned this before. One of my favorite type of Severus is the shy or virging Severus, and we don't get to read many of those stories....Maybe a voodoo doll of Severus?
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October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sneaky Slytherin, I think he's just having too good a time to wake up!
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October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAAAY! Library sex! Lol ^.^ Anyway, lovely chapter... But now its quite clear. The man's faking it now!!! He just wants to hear how much she wants him! XD I bet he's hoping she'll write a fantasy where he wakes up and wants to shag her right there... And then freak her out when it becomes reality, lols. But that's my own twisted thoughts. ^.^ Yours are so awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
CC, I thought it was HOT. I can see why it is one of Hermoine's favorites!!
I sooo hope that Severus is 'obsorbing' all of these fantasies.
Please continue; I love this storyline.
I sooo hope that Severus is 'obsorbing' all of these fantasies.
Please continue; I love this storyline.
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October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! The beginning of this one had me thinking of an idea you could mull over for a future chapter.
When Hermione falls asleep next to him, perhaps one of her fantasies of him is "remixed" in her dream world via him using legilimency, sort of how he wanted that particular fantasy she had read to him to play out
Hope this strikes your muse - but either way I cant wait for the next installment
When Hermione falls asleep next to him, perhaps one of her fantasies of him is "remixed" in her dream world via him using legilimency, sort of how he wanted that particular fantasy she had read to him to play out
Hope this strikes your muse - but either way I cant wait for the next installment