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by CryingCinderella

schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Pleasuring yourself next to your comatose professor, nice.
Pleasuring your comatose professor, hot.
Walking naked into the room after pleasuring your formally comatose professor to find him awake and holding your book of fantasies... PRICELESS!
I look forward to see what happens next, so please don't make us wait too long! Thank you, HG4eva
schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Odd; most men fall asleep after an orgasm...lol. I can hardly wait to see what happens next.
person Amanda
schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wohoo!Can't wait to see what happens next. PS - loved this fantasy!
person mvsanche
schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg! So excited that he's awake. Please update soon, ridiculously soon, today if possible!
person maharet22
schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO!!! Ok he's awake, COOL, please, let him have heard her stories. My overactive imagination likes to dance ahead when I get sucked into a good fanfic. Right about now its doing the tango! Eagerly awaiting her explanation to him and his reactions to said explanation!
P.S. REALLY loved pirate chapter!
schedule October 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh!! Well, one, I knew that we were just one more fantasy away from a coherent and awake Snape! Two, he's totally bluffing. He'll draw out her reaction and her apologies and her freaking out and her begging to be forgiven just because he's like that, then (as all us deviant Snape lovers hope), he'll simply seduce her into his bed and 'celebrate' his awakening. That, or Hermoine's going to get in huge trouble. *snicker* Fun will be had, I don't doubt it!

As for the fantasy, oh, so sexy, and dirty in more ways than one! Loved it! Perhaps Snape will share one of his own sometime? *evil grin*
person colao
schedule October 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I can't wait for more!!!
person kathyjo
schedule October 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay hes awake..now he can make her fantasies real! This is a wonderful story..each fantasy gets better and better
person angelaj
schedule October 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
NoOOOOOoOoooO! how could you leave your readers hanging! evil cliffy @_@

i'm thoroughly enjoying these fantasy scenarios. please update soon. pretty please!!
person erica
schedule October 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you know that you are a great writer. i love the story but the cliff hanger there without a new posting for another week is really going to suck.
don't change a thing with the story but i'm near the point of begging for the update. as always i will be ever watching for an update
erica