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excellent!  keep going, please

 

Aweee that was it... Ohhhh she kissed three different spot... Loved it!!! ❤️

The story has it's ups and downs. Your writing is generally good, even if I think you could describe the smut and the thoughts of both Harry and Hermione in ways far less cliche. It's also hard to see which one of them is thinking. I managed, but maybe others won't.

The grammar sometimes goes right to hell and there are several word confusion and spelling error issues going on.

But it's a strong story all the same and I'd love to see updates.

Yep, nice start. But when are we going to read the rest?
I like that writing style.

I like the slow process and the sexual tensen already between our two love birds.

More, please!

Fantastic start. I love the subtle hints of what is to come, and the slight change of what should have been. Keep up the fantastic work!

This seems pretty interesting, really wanna see where you going to take it. Haven't seen to many none time travel stories lately so to finally see one again..Well makes me glad.