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whoa, I let a few days go by and I find many chapters to catch up on, how nice! Nasty little cliffie, though. I hope that hermione will be all right? You wouldn't do that to us, would you? I can hardly wait for the next update.

I bet I know what happens next. I have completely enjoyed this fic and am sad to see it coming to a close. I hope you give them a son I would really love to know Sevs real name. Well done!!!!

That was such an evil cliffie it makes me want to whine eeevvviiillllllllll but you know we are all eating it up! Can't wait for the last chappy!

I love the back story. You did a great job of blending your Snape and cannon Snapes history. The anagram from Aspen was simply put, brilliant. I also failed to mention that your Albus is how I expected him to be. I always thought he was a master manipulator and unfortunatley Severus was caught between two lunatics. Each working twards their own goals. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!

What an incredibly difficult thing for Severus to have to do and a very clever thing to switch the surname too. Hermione is stronger than he thinks and very forgiving. I don't see her getting too bent out of shape about it.

Wonderful work as always, neelix, I'm quite intrigued! A good solution to the whole 'Lily' thing and the snake attack. However, I must ask, how did Dumbledore survive?! He was Avada-ed! He fell from the Astronomy Tower!! What saved him? Or was there an alternative? How did Fred survive, too? Does this mean Tonks and Remus are alive, as well?

I had no idea this was out until today. I went straight through and read all 11 chapters in one go. Need less to say I was very pleased. Its a lovely story that takes on a more lustful tone due to the circumstances. I love the in control yet pushed so far into the depths of his own dsire he might go mad Severus. It gives him a new demention other than the super spy we all know and love. I wish I would have seen it sooner and I also wish it would be a bit longer but I live with deadlines and understand that they must be met at all costs. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!

Hi Neelix I'm sorry I didn't realize this had been written for an exchange. I understand completely, I have a few going myself so of course you can't really add to it after the fact (unless you are so inclined.)

Loved that chapter! So sweet and to the point. I love the light that just shines inside of Hermione in this chapter and the poignant need of Severus as they come together as husband and wife. It was very romantic!!

Oh, no, I apologize for just now leaving a review. Your stories are always so wonderful I just couldn't stop myself. Great characterization of Severus, Hermione and especially Dumbledore. Showing him as caring but controlling and manipulative at the same time. I especially like the exploration of what "vampires" may be like in the HP world. Consider this review hit by a multiplying spell.

Albus always did irritate me, long before I found fan fiction. For such a ruthless git, he never once took a more efficient way of ending the war and I always found his treatment of Snape rather dark. Your stories are always character-driven and interesting. More when yu are ready, please!