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November 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Most excellent cliffhanger!
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November 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this was great! can't wait for the next chapter!
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November 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
About Ch. 17:
GAH!! Soo close! Also, PUZZLE PIECES! I really liked the description from Draco's perspective as Harry was fitting the pieces, it really gave a sense of what parts of the curse are active and how he is experiencing them, especially when they start to fight back. Owch! I didn't think this would be easy but I didn't expect the pain. It looks like the time to lift the curse in now are never and I'm quite glad because I'm not sure how much more suspense I can take. At the same time, when the last chapter does roll around, I'll miss looking for updates...
I'm glad that this was the "real" Draco slightly altered. It's been my hope from the beginning that the curse would change him just enough to see Harry in a way that would lead to their relationship continuing but not enough to rip apart his pride and confidence. All of that said, I do wonder how Harry will be truely convinced that Draco is no longer under the curse in any possible way if it is removed and Draco still wants Harry? Would he trust his experimental revealing spells enough to say that, if they show nothing, Draco is truely cured? Harry seems very fixed on the fact that Draco could never want him and any of Draco's efforts to convince him otherwise might seem too much like the curse in effect all over again... I've written too much already, I'd better stop.
GAH!! Soo close! Also, PUZZLE PIECES! I really liked the description from Draco's perspective as Harry was fitting the pieces, it really gave a sense of what parts of the curse are active and how he is experiencing them, especially when they start to fight back. Owch! I didn't think this would be easy but I didn't expect the pain. It looks like the time to lift the curse in now are never and I'm quite glad because I'm not sure how much more suspense I can take. At the same time, when the last chapter does roll around, I'll miss looking for updates...
I'm glad that this was the "real" Draco slightly altered. It's been my hope from the beginning that the curse would change him just enough to see Harry in a way that would lead to their relationship continuing but not enough to rip apart his pride and confidence. All of that said, I do wonder how Harry will be truely convinced that Draco is no longer under the curse in any possible way if it is removed and Draco still wants Harry? Would he trust his experimental revealing spells enough to say that, if they show nothing, Draco is truely cured? Harry seems very fixed on the fact that Draco could never want him and any of Draco's efforts to convince him otherwise might seem too much like the curse in effect all over again... I've written too much already, I'd better stop.
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November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, I didn't mean the term 'virginity' literally but rather... sort of mentally... I hope you get my point^^ So sorry, English isn't my mother tongue...
I certainly feel rather torn, because Draco switched moods so fast. Forced, but anyway...And I also hope that Harry had the correct idea and will be able to cure Draco a.s.a.p.! Preferably while he is still this lucid...
I also hope that the story won't just stop with Harry curing Draco. Knowing most of your stories, it probably won't, but I wanted to tell you anyway because I just can't await it^^
Thanks again for this awesome story and also this really wonderful chapter! Can't wait for the next one!!
I certainly feel rather torn, because Draco switched moods so fast. Forced, but anyway...And I also hope that Harry had the correct idea and will be able to cure Draco a.s.a.p.! Preferably while he is still this lucid...
I also hope that the story won't just stop with Harry curing Draco. Knowing most of your stories, it probably won't, but I wanted to tell you anyway because I just can't await it^^
Thanks again for this awesome story and also this really wonderful chapter! Can't wait for the next one!!
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November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 16:
Mmmm! I like this Draco a lot better, I hope he sticks around. To me this is the most natural Draco has been since we've seen him in this story. He's snarky, unappologetic, and demanding respect. I like it a lot! I am worried though, as this will only be temporary. I really don't want to see another attack when Harry's spell wears off but it almost feels inevitable. :S I sense another cliffhanger coming on but I still can't wait for the next piece of the puzzle!
Mmmm! I like this Draco a lot better, I hope he sticks around. To me this is the most natural Draco has been since we've seen him in this story. He's snarky, unappologetic, and demanding respect. I like it a lot! I am worried though, as this will only be temporary. I really don't want to see another attack when Harry's spell wears off but it almost feels inevitable. :S I sense another cliffhanger coming on but I still can't wait for the next piece of the puzzle!
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November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haven't seen a plot quite like this! Loving it!
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November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, dreaming of Harry? How sweet.
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November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, now I just have to know, how does the curse get cured?
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November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #16..[what's so lucky about it???]
I have to admit, no matter how frustrating Draco
is, that curse hasn't killed his 'playfulness'. :-)
Despite the temporary relief, I hope Harry comes up
with something, after all it's a curse, not a disease.
I bet Prof. Snape would have thought of something, probably
a potion of some sort.
Anyway, you're doing a good job with this story, it definitely
keeps your attention & on edge. :-)
I have to admit, no matter how frustrating Draco
is, that curse hasn't killed his 'playfulness'. :-)
Despite the temporary relief, I hope Harry comes up
with something, after all it's a curse, not a disease.
I bet Prof. Snape would have thought of something, probably
a potion of some sort.
Anyway, you're doing a good job with this story, it definitely
keeps your attention & on edge. :-)
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November 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
loved it! oooo can't wait for the next ch.