schedule
November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 18:
*winces* Owch! All that physical pain and then emotional pain... I don't know how this is going to work out but I hope it does and I trust you enough to believe that, even if this doesn't end the way I want it to, it will be true to your characters which is most important and one of many reasons why I love your work. I don't know how you can write so many detailed and downright fabulous stories all at once but I certainly enjoy watching it happen. :)
*winces* Owch! All that physical pain and then emotional pain... I don't know how this is going to work out but I hope it does and I trust you enough to believe that, even if this doesn't end the way I want it to, it will be true to your characters which is most important and one of many reasons why I love your work. I don't know how you can write so many detailed and downright fabulous stories all at once but I certainly enjoy watching it happen. :)
schedule
November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
... *sniff* ... *sniffs some more*
That was to be expected, but still... it's really sad to see Draco so confused about his feelings.
I'm really glad that Harry managed to get the Curse under controll. Although he caused Draco so much pain, I dearly hope that he will be able to forgive himself for failing in his attempt to break Nova Cupiditas completely... But I really feel with Draco, who has a lot to think and come clear about. I mean, just imagine killing people in cold blood... Nobody likes to think he is capable of something like that...
And I also hope that Harry will eventually be able to trust Dracos feelings - if he still has them and is willing to go after what he wants.
That was to be expected, but still... it's really sad to see Draco so confused about his feelings.
I'm really glad that Harry managed to get the Curse under controll. Although he caused Draco so much pain, I dearly hope that he will be able to forgive himself for failing in his attempt to break Nova Cupiditas completely... But I really feel with Draco, who has a lot to think and come clear about. I mean, just imagine killing people in cold blood... Nobody likes to think he is capable of something like that...
And I also hope that Harry will eventually be able to trust Dracos feelings - if he still has them and is willing to go after what he wants.
schedule
November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #18...
Nothing much to say except I really feel sorry
for them, because if they WANTED to get together
that curse will always be in the back of their
minds and they won't be sure if it's real...for
Draco at least.
Nothing much to say except I really feel sorry
for them, because if they WANTED to get together
that curse will always be in the back of their
minds and they won't be sure if it's real...for
Draco at least.
schedule
November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting development...Lovely. Can't wait for more.
schedule
November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! This was a promising chapter. I'm so glad you had them take Draco's wand - it's been bugging me!
schedule
November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, what a cliffy... Loved!
schedule
November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #16..
Well, that just really sucked..for Harry. I thought
he had something figured out, speaking of figured out,
the way Harry sees the spell as a 'snake', you would
THINK he would look at using Parseltongue as a possible
solution.
..wouldn't hurt to try.
Well, that just really sucked..for Harry. I thought
he had something figured out, speaking of figured out,
the way Harry sees the spell as a 'snake', you would
THINK he would look at using Parseltongue as a possible
solution.
..wouldn't hurt to try.
schedule
November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, Yeah, YEAH!! *cheers Harry on*
Somethings happening and so far it didn't involve Draco dying of Harry being raped and that alone makes for a promise of a happy ending for this story! Great chapter, I just coudn't stop reading!! It was fascinating as always, the way that your stories are so carefully planned out and new and fascinating and wow, the spells ans curses you come up with... Miss Rowling should ask you for ideas in that area, they are just great!!
Phew, I hope that conveyed the message that this chapter, no this story, is just f***ing brilliant!!! And I really can't wait for more! You really got me hyped up here...
It has nothing to do with this chapter, but I wanted to say it anyway:
what I really admire about your stories is that you always know when to start and, more importantly, when to stop! I've seen so many fics where the idea was good, but the author didn't know when to stop telling the story and just let the reader imagine. But you create an entirely new world with each story you come up with, tell what is interesting and worth telling and then... Stop! And I am really grateful that you possess this talent, because a good story could be made bad with a wrong ending or, even worse, no ending at all.
Ok, I know I'm rambling... Just wanted you to know that I really, really appreciate your work and just LOVE your style of writing!! Thanks for both!!
Somethings happening and so far it didn't involve Draco dying of Harry being raped and that alone makes for a promise of a happy ending for this story! Great chapter, I just coudn't stop reading!! It was fascinating as always, the way that your stories are so carefully planned out and new and fascinating and wow, the spells ans curses you come up with... Miss Rowling should ask you for ideas in that area, they are just great!!
Phew, I hope that conveyed the message that this chapter, no this story, is just f***ing brilliant!!! And I really can't wait for more! You really got me hyped up here...
It has nothing to do with this chapter, but I wanted to say it anyway:
what I really admire about your stories is that you always know when to start and, more importantly, when to stop! I've seen so many fics where the idea was good, but the author didn't know when to stop telling the story and just let the reader imagine. But you create an entirely new world with each story you come up with, tell what is interesting and worth telling and then... Stop! And I am really grateful that you possess this talent, because a good story could be made bad with a wrong ending or, even worse, no ending at all.
Ok, I know I'm rambling... Just wanted you to know that I really, really appreciate your work and just LOVE your style of writing!! Thanks for both!!
schedule
November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
cool~!
schedule
November 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is so good. I like it alot. please write more. please i will give lots of cookies!