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September 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow! this is such an awesome fic so far! quite original and wonderful characterization! i hope to read more soon!
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September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3
Still enjoying this immensely. I can see several different ways for it to go and ultimately end up, and its intriguing enough that I'm anxious for the next update, to see where it goes.
Still enjoying this immensely. I can see several different ways for it to go and ultimately end up, and its intriguing enough that I'm anxious for the next update, to see where it goes.
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September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I am so loving this. You're doing such a brilliant job with everything! I really hope this is updated soon. I'm so glad that I found this - thank you so much for writing!
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September 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm very interested so far. I love how you write Harry.
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September 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #3...
1. First thought that struck me when I started this is
how amazed I am that after 120+ stories, you're STILL
able to think of chapter names. :-)
2. You know this story has a different type feel to it,
like being wound up in a tight ball and you're straining
from the pressure OR you're really tense waiting for the
other shoe to drop.
Are you feeling tense right now or feeling inspired by
sudden events in your life?
3. Well, the last HP movie is about to come out...I dunno,
I still feel he should have died killing Voldemort and then
he wouldn't have married Ginny Weasley. :-)
I can't stand cliches...
1. First thought that struck me when I started this is
how amazed I am that after 120+ stories, you're STILL
able to think of chapter names. :-)
2. You know this story has a different type feel to it,
like being wound up in a tight ball and you're straining
from the pressure OR you're really tense waiting for the
other shoe to drop.
Are you feeling tense right now or feeling inspired by
sudden events in your life?
3. Well, the last HP movie is about to come out...I dunno,
I still feel he should have died killing Voldemort and then
he wouldn't have married Ginny Weasley. :-)
I can't stand cliches...
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September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Draco was cursed and not Harry. If Harry would have been cursed, he would have been screwed. Well, not literally. I'm sure Draco would never allow Harry to screw him. ^^ Can't wait for the next chapter!
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September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter two:
I tried to review for the first chapter, but I'm using my phone and not a computer, and it sometimes has hate.
Anyway, I'm fully intrigued. I like the idea, and as always, your writing is superb. I'm definitely looking forward to more from this one.
I tried to review for the first chapter, but I'm using my phone and not a computer, and it sometimes has hate.
Anyway, I'm fully intrigued. I like the idea, and as always, your writing is superb. I'm definitely looking forward to more from this one.
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September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, your dark stories are pretty amazing, too^^
I'm really glad that nobody is going to die. That puts an end to my fears that Draco is going to kill himself out of desperation. And that's a relief for me, because I can't read fics where one of our boys dies. They have me crying for days...
I especially liked this chapter, because you conveyed so much of Dracos need for Harry and the hunger of the course. I also liked it that Draco still feels the need for Harry as something that doesn't really belong to him. That has me hoping that his mind won't suffer too much from the strain of being pulled back and forth between the course and his own thoughts.
In my opinion, with a situation like this one, you can't expect a fairytale ending. I would be content if Harry could just remove the inclination to kill yourself from the course so that he and Draco can live together without the fear of impending death. But that would be too easy, right? *g*
I'm really glad that nobody is going to die. That puts an end to my fears that Draco is going to kill himself out of desperation. And that's a relief for me, because I can't read fics where one of our boys dies. They have me crying for days...
I especially liked this chapter, because you conveyed so much of Dracos need for Harry and the hunger of the course. I also liked it that Draco still feels the need for Harry as something that doesn't really belong to him. That has me hoping that his mind won't suffer too much from the strain of being pulled back and forth between the course and his own thoughts.
In my opinion, with a situation like this one, you can't expect a fairytale ending. I would be content if Harry could just remove the inclination to kill yourself from the course so that he and Draco can live together without the fear of impending death. But that would be too easy, right? *g*
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September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
well this is really interesting I hope to see more soon.
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September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #2...
1. Oookay, this may sound weird, BUT...the beginning of this chapter
almost sounds like you skipped a scene or two..and what's up with
the name Devouring Curse? Is that the english translation for
Nova Cupiditas?
2. Otherwise, this is definitely different stuff coming from you.
1. Oookay, this may sound weird, BUT...the beginning of this chapter
almost sounds like you skipped a scene or two..and what's up with
the name Devouring Curse? Is that the english translation for
Nova Cupiditas?
2. Otherwise, this is definitely different stuff coming from you.