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for Nova Cupiditas

by Lomonaaeren

person W
schedule October 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This Chapter really took me by surprise... I didn't think that it would take the story such a short time to develop into a near-rape situation. This fast progress really worries me, because so far Harry doesn't seem to have a clue how to defeat the Curse... He should really hurry up!

Well, it would really help me if you could assure me of them both making it through the story alive? And perhaps even without long-lasting injuries? That would really help me sleep^^
person W
schedule October 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I have to apologize for the last review! I didn't realize that you already mentioned that nobody is going to die. Which I'm really glad for, by the way! I got your stories mixed up in my head, sorry again... Forget everything I said in my last review! Except the part abaut the last chapter being a surprise, that's still true...
*realizes she is babbling and beats a hasty retreat*
person Vibora
schedule October 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ahhh! *distress*
omg! i'm all in a adither...when will draco strike again!
person pittwitch
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! The description of the blood magic and the Apparation was fantastic!
person SP777
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #5....

O___o

...and that's all I will say on that chapter.

By the way, what's up with that chapter title?
person Vibora
schedule September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
woo! new chapter! you're awesome!
interesting you said/implied about lucius; i wonder what his reaction will be.
*patiently waiting for some hot draco/harry action* ;)
-something happened and i had to come write this review for a second time when i noticed the author for this awesome fic is you-the awesome lomonaerren (i spelled that wrong i know it), whom i lurve....no wonder i like this fic so much! lol-
person W
schedule September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm really glad that there are ways for Draco to keep his mind even when he's under the course. But I don't know why Harry can't keep casting the Cold Water Course until he finds a solution? Or would this course have side-effects when used for a long time?

I can't figure out where this story is going though and it's driving me mad!!! But I hope that it will have a happy ending^^
Good job!
schedule September 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Meh cliffhanger!!!
Can't wait for more; it's progressing wonderfully.
person SP777
schedule September 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #4...

I hope Harry is able to find a cure for something that
is considered 'uncurable', I hope they find the people
who did this to Draco...and I hope Draco beats the snot
out of them!
person mariahs_fantasy
schedule September 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter, showed us how dangerous the curse can be, despite its more seemingly positive *yaoi!* outcomes. Yes, it was stated, but nothing like an example to grip people into understanding. Also, the 'black whirlwind' of Draco's jealousy reminds me of Harry's green chest monster. Thought it was a cute thing, and was nice to see someone else's jealousy described that way. Can't wait or the next update!