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for Nova Cupiditas

by Lomonaaeren

person purple-er
schedule November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm getting a bit worried about where this is going, I have no idea what's going to happen next!
please let this be a sort-of happy ending....??
sigh, thats okay you're the author and all, so you decide, but still...
person SParker
schedule November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #14 [hmph...what's so unlucky about it? :-p]

A thought just hit me..whatever happened to Gung-ho Harry???

This one is almost like a...wuss. He reminds me of a bookworm.

Oh my God! Is he channeling Hermione!!! O_o

Someone call 911, we have an imposter! *_*
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Okay, got that off my chest. ^___^
Anyway, I see Draco is truly slipping into darkness,
will we ever get him back?
person amysds
schedule November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Why on EARTH is Harry letting Draco keep his wand?! I get not trying to humiliate him further and blah blah blah. But the only way for him to get thru wards and keep Harry down is with his WAND.
person W
schedule November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What are you doing to us?!?!

This cliffhanger is so bad, I can't even begin to describe it! First I thought that Draco sounded reasonable, and then he pulled _this_ stunt! I'm so afraid for both of them, I can't even decide if I want the next chapter to appear soon or not...

I also have to congratulate you for this entirely unique and brilliant story. It seems as if you really enjoy inventing new (and quite dark) Curses... Don't let anything stop you, you're absolutely unmatched in this field! And your writing just seems to get better and better! For your effort and skill and time and ideas (among other things^^) you have my undying adoration!! Thanks a lot, again!!

PS: I made a decision. I want the next chapter as soon as possible^^
schedule November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh ... Harry should've been watching out for that one a little better! I can't decide if I want Draco to get his way because it'd be hot, or recover first so it's all morally above board. Tough call.
schedule November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, this curse gets more complex all the time... Loved!
schedule November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Gik, scaryful. I hope harry has a shot at cracking this curse... and living through it. It's s0ounding more and mmore like Malfoy can't be saved and if he is, he's going to be screwed like a spiral staircase. Poor Malfoy.
schedule November 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Loved this chapter so much!
person Tess
schedule November 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG I am SO in love with this fiction! Your writing is extremely good also, you're obviously very good at english. The story is very clever.

I really do hope you finish this story because I'm enjoying it so much! I've started fics before where the author never finished it and I was like D:
person magentah
schedule October 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"His hand closed down, crushing Harry