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for Willingly

by KyoIchigaki

schedule October 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hot, hot, hot! I guess it is a good thing that Hermoine has finally let her Master start playing with her ass.

I suspect that the noise was Ron getting a real 'show'. I think that he will convince Harry to let him join in with Harry and his slave. After all, they are 'best friends', don't best friends share?!?!?!?!
schedule September 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OK, I understand that not EVERY chapter must have smut...but it doesn't mean that I can't wish that it did!?!?!?! I am glad that the M/s will be proud parents.

Now I am curious as to WHAT kind of celebration Harry (Master) has planned for his fiancee (slave). Please bring on the SMUT!!
schedule September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hot, Hot, Hot!!!

I knew the bathroom scene was going to be a good one. And a baby made at the same time, didn't see that coming.

I sincerly wish that you will continue this smut filled story, making sure that your readers get EVERY code that you promised us.

My your muse be kind and generous!
person pfeil
schedule September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, it's back!

I loved the first version, and can't wait to see how this one comes out. Collared Hermione is win :)
schedule September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
looks great, but i'd say it lacks of a pre-prologue, how did they get there ? why Ron isn't his jealous self (apparently it's year 6, so he is already in love with her since about 2 years) ?
COntinuuuuuue,
Z.
person Shago123
schedule September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awsome story so far. I love the plot
i hope ull give detail on the discription of the bodies when the smut comes along.like Harrys size..hermiones breasts. anyways its ur story. cant wait for the next chapter.
schedule September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, a "collared" Hemoine...I love it already. Can't wait to hear about what Master does to his pet in the Prefect's bathroom!?!?!?!?!