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May 23, 2020 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this was very good, with the exception of Chapter 6. It felt like a different story. Hermione is Harry's slave, but... she fancies Ron and is going to the ball with Krum? It's like you forgot what story you were writing and just fell back into canon. The story would be better if you just deleted Chapter 6.
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May 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM
i love, love, love this story! please, please keep writing!
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December 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM
this is a really, really cool fic! lot's of fun. i look forward to next chapter!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! (^_^)
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March 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You have a good thing going here and I hope to see it continue. Any chances that the Harem for lack of a better term will grow? Maybe throw in Ginny or the other Parvati sister among others?
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March 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
A well written, very interesting AU HP/HG/PP (So far!) story. Please keep writing. I know what it's like wanting to write but can't. I practally live in the hospittal.
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May 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good story, but too short so far.) I hope there would be much more.
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August 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So far a good saucy story.
Well setup. A bit weird is the "Master" attitude but if it's playful, why not.
I hope you will goon some more chapters.
It also is a bit out of the way witch make it even more interesting.
See you soon.
Well setup. A bit weird is the "Master" attitude but if it's playful, why not.
I hope you will goon some more chapters.
It also is a bit out of the way witch make it even more interesting.
See you soon.
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November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
When whill you add another chapter to this story?
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June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
On the second chapter, there is a part, where Herm. gets undressed. You describe her bra size, a 42B that means she has B cup breasts (not very big) but a insanly thick torso, which most B cup ladies don't have. Hell, I don't have a 42 torso. To make it more realistic, if you were going for a medium sized Herm. I'd choose like, 38B. If you wanted bigger breasts, I'd go with a 38C (of 40C if you want Herm. a little thicker). But So far, I love it :) <33
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June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story. I've been on the site many times looking for stories like this and am not sure how i missed yours. Anyways please continue with this story. Its a great idea with a great plot and just the right amount of smut. keep up the great work and please update soon!