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by CryingCinderella

person ComicalChaos
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. Beautiful. I loved it. I can't wait for more :)
person aliciana
schedule October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Christ! The computer's set on fire. Naughty, naughty Severus. The little devil on his left shoulder didn't have to persuade him too much to continue his "affair" with Hermione. Did he? Great stuff. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.
schedule October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awesome!!!!!!!!!!! please update soon!!!
schedule October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was so effing hot and nasty. Loved every single second of it. Love it love it love it! Hot hot hot Severus!
schedule October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Severus Snape can "teach me" any time. I am so envious of Hermoine.

What will they do next? What other techniques and deviations will Severus "teach" Hermoine next??

I await your next chapter with naughty thoughts running through my head!!!
person Mary
schedule October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter and the plot continuous... what will Severus will do next? Can't wait for more!
person Tani
schedule October 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I really really like it :-)
person Anon
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is interesting. i hope you plan on finishing this..very good so far..
schedule September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was great!!!

What does Hermione have in mind now??
person ComicalChaos
schedule September 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Incredible. Lovely. I am in love with this story. More please, I am loving your fast updates. :)