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by CryingCinderella

person QuinnAgain
schedule February 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Too lovely. Although I thought I may have donkey punched Severus if he tried to kick out Hermione again... lol

Your Snape is spot on! Cheers!
person 87BTemp
schedule December 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great, great story! Loved it!! Now finish the rest
schedule October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn. That was HOT! Absolutely scorching! And the end was super sweet. I loved it! Thank you so much for sharing it. (my bf thanks you too ;) ...) lol looking forward to reading more of your amazingly written stories.
-rjm
schedule August 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I dont know how she could even develop feelings here..he is totally humilating her making her feel dirty..myself i think when he requested to strip naked and masturbate i would have left his office (nude) right to the headmasters and told him what was up!
person Anne
schedule August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh WOW! Such a captivating story *fans* Thanks so much for the treat!

schedule May 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well that was dam hot
person EveAlli
schedule May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! I've read it SOOO many times, loving it more and more each time I do! Its wonderfully written and amazing to read. Thank you so much for writing it! :D

~*E.A.*~
person Glorioux
schedule January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Extraordinarily hot and wicked. Professor, sir, ms granger...rule breakers, inappropriate, naughty, the entire bit.. Not sure who is naughtier of the two. A close call
person knitchick
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was a really good story. Poor Severus never stood a chance once Hermione made up her mind.
schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
My dear I bow to you for doing Severus justice! Soooo many make him soo corny, but I could actually hear his voice the whole time. The scenes were all written out beautifully and I love how simply you ended it. VERY well done!