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I really enjoyed this story. I especially like how Hermione was not childish and had mature due to having her child. I enjoyed how Severus was portrayed as well.

Wonderful story - I really do love it you know.

And I am very happy that you are writing a sequel.

Firstly: I really love this story and I have only just found it today.

The one thing I do not like is how immature your Hermione is.
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Again a wonderful chapter, but I wonder, why Hermione insists, that she can only live as a muggle in Australia or a which in England. Why not pursue a wizarding career in Australia? Surely there is a wizarding community in Australia. To assume there isn't seems quite absurd.

But I liked, that she behaved a bit more mature generally. Except some things, like this one of course:

I've really enjoyed this fix. Believable storyline and excellent characterization. Very nice!

I've only read the first chapter but I know I'll continue reading this and its sequel because this fic is good. :) You follow enough of the story to make the disappearance plausible (conveniently giving us a good frame of reference as well), and it is a rare fic that bothers to do that. The only thing I wonder at this point is why she thinks Snape is alive when he's supposed to be dead for the rest of the world. Onward with the reading!

Such a sweet ending. I look forward to the next installment and I'm very happy about the personalities you've given everyone. Very realistic.

This story was awesome, and I'm looking forward to the sequel. Thanks for writing it!

Oh goodness. That was a bit dissatisfying. Not that it wasn't well crafted, because it was, and the interactions were pretty spot on as far as the characters you have built up, and I know you're penning the sequel, which I hope will go further than this one- but I do suppose I was expecting some more finality to it. You could have easily pulled that on another few chapters or so, debating what to do about visiting rights, their interactions whilst she apprenticed under him, etc. But I suppose you felt your stopping point and I've no reason to grudge you that. I guess I just wanted more, expected more, I don't know. I wish you luck with your sequel. And commend you on the work if it ended a bit unsolved.

Cheers,
CryingCinderella

Thank you for sharing this story with us. It was simply lovely! I look forward to the sequel. And, congratulations on our new job! HG4eva