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schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
the really give Harry no credit at all. Very complacent of them, especially without the juice of control.
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Given the differences between Light and Dark wizard about family, marriage and women's rights it's clear why the Light side is so muggle-lover: muggleborn and halfblood women know nothing about the wizarding world tradition and like Hermione end up married with domineering, bigoted, chauvinist bullies, and wizardborn witches marry wizard used to think about women as equal so they are free to do all they want, pretty much like Ginny (I'd like to see how much she'd liked if Harry'd start to behave like Ron, demanding her to be always at home doing only what he wants... no more wasting money, no more 2 months holiday without her husband and children spent with who knows who, doing who knows what).
Hope to read a new chapter soon, perhaps with some clues about the food. Does the Light side use a potion to make the muggleborn wives and husbands pliant and accomodating?
person layne378
schedule April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG... I love this story!!! I can not wait for the next chapters to be posted. This story has me enthralled. Please update soon. :-)
schedule April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The description you gave of dark and light wizards makes me think of the Democrats and Republicans in the US. The Democrats being the dark, or more liberal people, and the Republicans the holier-than-though's, who want to see women barefoot and pregnant, while staying at home to cook and clean. I would love to see you give this as an example in the story.
schedule April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i start this story becouse i thought it would be good, seeing ron and hermoien happy in marrige, and harry tring to figure out how to tell his wife he know longer love her, and harry being afraid he would lose his best friend. but know you made ron monster that tries to control his wife,

schedule April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm reviewing in hope of helping to inspire you into writing a new chapter :)
I found your story today and i'm happy i did as it was simply WONDERFUL!!
I literaly laughed out loud at one of your end notes on how the story would move slow because he could not simply wake up and think "Hey i'm gay!" So thank you for giving me a good laugh!
I love the idea of Dark and Light wizards and i love how creative you are and the approach you're taking on this story.
I just hope eventually Draco isn't such an (Excuse the language) ass!! Haha.
So i can't wait for you to continue and i will try to be patient but, i'm bad at it so bare with me.
<3 Eli (pronounce Ely :)
schedule April 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story, but really want things to move along!! Hehehehe... ;)
schedule March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, messed up much... I'm thinking Ron needs to go on a diet too.
person Anon
schedule March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Candida? I am tempted to say "you simply cannot be serious" but I have a feeling you are not... Entirely.
person Anon
schedule March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well... Isn't Ronald the biggest cuddily teddy bear you ever did see? I found the conversation between Harry and Hermione about Malfoy out of place. That would be the last thing they would discuss. Looking forward to more, however!