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Wow I love the chapter2 because we see J.C *_*
From what i read, it's before J.C get anita as human servant. Maybe with Harry here, he will not need her. Better try to woo Harry -a powerful wizard- than that stupid girl >_<
It gonna will fun i think :)

First off, I'm a total sucker for Harry in St. Louis, so I was really happy to see this, and I'm really curious to see how it plays out. And you've done a really good job setting up the situation, but I do have some constructive criticism. First, in Chapter 1, the conversation with Hermione seemed to drag just a little bit; I think the dialogue could have been tweaked, until it was shorter, just a bit neater in places, if that makes sense. During that conversation too, there were very few sensory details, and we lost track of where Harry was, or what his new house looked like, or smelled, or any detail to really orient us. The second chapter felt much smoother--there were more details to clue us in, but there could always be more. I always love texture and scent details sprinkled throughout a scene, just to complete the set. But really, these are fairly minor technical issues and I absolutely love what you have up right now. The scene with Jean-Claude was just so much fun, and I really can't wait to see what happens next. ^_^

Wonderful

Promising start! I look forward to reading more...

I really like your story so far. There are just not enough Anita Blake/HP crossovers good luck and keep on write its great so far.

I like it. Do more!

Really good so far please keep updating as quickly as you have been :) so I may have missed it but is there a set pairing so far?

awesome ... Love Jean Claude

It looks good. More chapters please.

yes, a new ab/hp xover, love the start of this, cant wait to read more .. wonder who the pairing will be..