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for Daydreams of Desire

by ShilohDarke

person Nightqueen
schedule September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love this story! Please keep the chapters coming! The whole premise to the story is very erotic and sexy! Well done!!!!
person Rosalie Ayers
schedule September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yes, you suck-seeded!! i love this story! cant wait for chappie 3, that cliffie was cruel!! =(
person sandlapper
schedule September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nice!! It really works as a one shot, but I for one, am greedy for more!! Please continue!!!
person Lu
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Definitely continue, I'd like to see how severus makes his way into her daydreams.
person cilly
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yes, please continue the story. I can't wait to read the next chapter. You certainly captivated me
person SignoraE
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes! More Please!
person snakekat
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it, more,more,more please.
person Nightqueen
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!!!! continue on with this story. I can't begin to tell you how much I enjoyed this chapter. This story is completely delicious! I am going to shamelessly beg for more as soon as you can post it!
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh I think this is definitely a story you should continue!! The sexual tension could be cut with a butter knife, it was so thick. Love these kind of stories.
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, PLEASE don't leave it at just this chapter! That was wonderfully hot and just a bit mysterious as well... Makes me wonder if he can slip into - or influence - her night dreams as well.