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for Daydreams of Desire

by ShilohDarke

schedule November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see what happens next! Great story
schedule October 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think Severus is going to flip when the door unlocks itself and they aren't allowed to suppress their feelings. ;-) Or, at least I hope that's what happens. LMAO Thank you, hon! I look forward to more really soon. HG4eva
schedule October 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I do see what you mean. The castle has plans for both Hermione and Severus; and it will not let them stray from that plan.

I like that the castle has become an entity that can control these two. I can't wait to see what else it has planned for these two "young" lovebirds?!?!?!?!?!
person Mary
schedule October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very hot and creative story line. I like the unique world of magic you created. Hope to read more soon!
person Nyouko
schedule October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What the fuck? That is just mean. I don't like meny Snape/anyone but I love this story. Please UPDATE soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Nightqueen
schedule October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love it! Their magic is in sync and it wants them together as much as they truly want to be together! I can't wait for the next chapter!! It's awesome to see the Castle playing match maker!!!!
schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Phenomenal, as expected, absolutely delicious. I so needed something to erase a bad image from my fantasies, so I was trolling, and lo and behold, what to my wondering, blood-shot, eyes did appear, but a lovely story from one of my favorite authors. I can't wait to read more.
Thanks for sharing with us!
PW
schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! His insecurity was touching, as were her words of reassurance. I look forward to seeing what happens now that the castle's magic has taken over. Malfoy never stood a chance. lol Thank you, HG4eva
schedule October 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I never thought of the castle itself being a magical entity. I love that it has decided to make them both face their feelings and stop 'playing aroung'.

Now, on to the hardcore stuff!?!?!?!?!

I await your next chapter with heavy breathing ;)
person dogdays
schedule October 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Woo baby! This fic is hot!! Can't wait to read the next chapter!!