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I didn't see that coming! And now I'm even MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE excited for the next chapter! hehehehe

xoxxo

mila

i knew iT! she was raped...how awful poor hermonie



and draco comforted her and made it all better :)


please post more please im anxious too know whats next girl

Fabulous chapter! My favorite I think! It was hard reading about what happened to Hermione, but it was essential to the plot. I really can't wait for H and D to hunt for Hermione's parents. I think it could be quite interesting! hehe. Oh and PLEASE let Hermione be able to have kids. With them both being only children I always thought they should have a large brood!

xoxo

Mila-Renae

I can't wait for an update!

I am enjoying the plot but a beta would do you wonders. There is a typo in almost every line but my favorite is this one:

"let's just say it is good there are five other Weasley ales in your family to carry on your line"

And my first thought was about beer! It took me a moment to see you meant males. Get someone to look this over and it will be a really good story.

okay i believe hermomie is hiding something


i think maybe she was raped or sexually abused or something to feel dirty


unless you have something else in mind...guess ill have to wait and she

Love the complexity that you are giving to your characters. The writing is well thought out and developed. Keep going!

Wow. I really didn't see that coming! This makes the fact that H was willing to do anything with Draco in the carriage a huge step for her. Wow. I'm really not sure what to say. Until the last bit of this story I was hoping it would end up being mostly PWP, but now that just wouldn't do it justice. I do have to say that I can't believe H would be this trusting or naive/stupid. Please at least write in some misgivings she has about Draco. It will make your story a tad more believable. Anf it would be bloody FANTASTIC to get to see Molly FREAK out on Ron for what he said/did. Oh and I'm glad Ginny is still on H side. She is quite likable, even in the books. Kudos to a great chapter.

xoxo

Mila

Cool. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it is here soon.

Cosmyk

okay...

this is a bit different , but i love it anyways


i wonder is draco really going to be like his dad in the end?

and ron being a git- come on write more plz ilove it

uh oh seems like dracos a little jealous :)


this was excellant alexa i cant wait to read chapter3


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