rate_review Reviews

You have a good story here, and I love that there's going to be an original character adding to the mix. Very interested in seeing how he fits into the tale.

I found it hard to distinguish between Hermione's thoughts, and Draco's point of view at first. Would you consider italics for the interior monologues or perhaps a little more spacing between them? :) Thanks and look forward to the next chapter. :)

I look forward to see where you take this.

Good beginning. I think this story has a lot of potential.
Post soon plz.
Straight

Hey,

Just read your first chapter. Pretty damn good m'lady! :D I like cruel draco, i just can't help it. But at the end you see he's not mean coz he wants her to be happy. There were a couple of mistakes that were a bit distracting but mine was the same and I ended up with two Betas. As for your blogspot- this is the link http://prophecyoftheforbidden.blogspot.com/
It's called a URL and it's in the search bar at the top of any webpage, like an address almost. If you copy and paste it ppl can copy and paste it straight into the search bar :) Hope this helps. I look forward to chapter two!

BTW thanks for suggesting my fic hun! :D

Your very welcome no worries or problems ^__^

Anyways it's a good story and you know I read it before and liked it then and I am honored to help and be your Beta so again thank you.

Besides it's good to be able to read what happens next before anyone else does :P But i know grom what you had posted at FF.net was really good and I'm glad you brought the story or are bringing the story here to Adult Fanfiction.

Anyways Blessed Be!

Luv ya and be good!! hehe Don't do nothing i wouldn't and that's very broad as there is almost nothing i wouldn't do!!

Alexa