rate_review Reviews

It was a very fun story to read.
I will pass this onto hubby.
He will enjoy it for many reasons.
The storyline. It is a short story. It is complete. But most importantly it is complete and no nagging the wife for the next chapter.

oh where to start? ok first off; i had a feeling about violet but thought i jumped to wrong conclusion and being moldy-butt's little half-sister was an excellent twist (evil and insanity must run in the family). second; i sure there have plenty of men who fell asleep before they get to the good stuff, especially after a long day of hard work. third; they could atleast showed up for 15 minutes at "their" ball, it was like of rude. fourth; loved the sex bit, gave me a VERY warm feeling inside. fifth; thank you for the kind words from your author's note. this was an amazing story.

love the last sentence of this chapter.

Only one more? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Good thing the last chapter is full of promise (of which I know you will deliver). :)

Another tension filled chapter, and squeee, I wondered if they were going to disappear down the trapdoor and they did, though I thought Hermione would be the one to think of it. I guess she has to be the damsel in distress sometimes. Sure took her turn to be the one in charge though. :) Aww I don't want this to end. Please tell me you have more stories lined up for when this one is over??????

through this whole i found myself picturing draco dressed as naruto. and from my point of view it was a funny image. this chapter also proves that even mental, a man is weak against a pair of tits (even gay guys can't ignore them). i can't wait for the next chapter.

This has a whole James Bond feel to it which I love, whether that's your intention or not, I don't care, love the whole intrigue and action fast pace of it. Reckon if I get myself one of those skirts I can get Draco to hide under it too? LMAO If only. LOL As for the end though, how dare you finish it there, like that. I want more. Well done!!

oOo new chapter !!!! that was quick ! and delightfull ! love the chapter and evil!jonathan, he knew ??? and he told them the truth. why do i feel a Mr&Mrs Smith kind of relationship to come for draco and hermione ? i would love to see them make team together against the bad guy.

now i want to know who is the woman in black ? surely not hermione ( draco would have seen the shoes under her skirt ?) no?

(thumb up for the sex scene, hot ! well done )

i can't wait for next chapter ! please keep going .

ohhh my..what a juicy chapter and cliffhanger...
i cannot wait to read about what happens next??? i will be patiently (not) waiting for a new chapter!!!! lol

Wow. Didnt see that twist comig. :)

OOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!!!!!! Cant wait for the next chapter!