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July 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved this! So carnal and hot, with such a passionate attraction beyond pure lust to boot! Kudos!
Thanks so much for writing!
Thanks so much for writing!
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June 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
An utterly enjoyable story. Really liked your creative writing style.
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December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh, really, really good, fantastic smut! XD the plot line was good too! Although it was Hermione's and Draco's interactions with each other that really got me hooked, this was just good overall! Thank you for this, it really brightened my evening.
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September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That's all I have to say at the moment. Just Wow!
Cosmyk
Cosmyk
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September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am so sorry I wasn't here to review as you got the last couple chapters out. Darn vacation! NOT! lol I have enjoyed this story from the start. And, I will say the smut was absolutely necessary after all the build up. :-) Congrats on a job well done and thank you once more, HG4eva
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September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
MURDER MURDER YES IT IS GOOO.... NOT! The fact is that what Draco did at the end of this story was simply, plain and simple, MURDER. I can count 500 different way that he could have stopped her WITHOUT killing her. He should be locked up for the rest of his life, NOT with Hermione Granger, just as anyone who did this in REAL LIFE should be!
That is the bottom line, blunt truth here.
That is the bottom line, blunt truth here.
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September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great ending to a great story!!! Great job! i really enjoyed reading it!
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September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. Loved every second. :) Did not see it coming about Violet being Voldy's half sis.
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September 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Merlin's pants, woman... you should have warned me you'll be churning out chapters like that!
You're on ADULTfanfiction - never, EVER apologze for the smut - it's bad form. BTW, the "Oh God. I fell asleep!" bit was a hoot! lol
The whole "half-sister" thing was a nice twist, too.
I loved the combination of wisecracking and fast-paced action. And I was rather pleased by the overall presentation once again: there's nothing worse than a good story riddled with bad grammar/style. Still a couple of punctuation issues to solve ("Violets shoulder length blonde hair, hung sleek and perfectly straight", anyone? Oh, and "What better place to start then wiping out both governments" is a question, while "then" is an adverb, not a conjunction. And you can't answer "But WOULD Hermione actually ask for it?" with "Yes, she COULD.") but, for the most part, you did your homework well.
I'd honestly prefer less (ab)used lines than
You're on ADULTfanfiction - never, EVER apologze for the smut - it's bad form. BTW, the "Oh God. I fell asleep!" bit was a hoot! lol
The whole "half-sister" thing was a nice twist, too.
I loved the combination of wisecracking and fast-paced action. And I was rather pleased by the overall presentation once again: there's nothing worse than a good story riddled with bad grammar/style. Still a couple of punctuation issues to solve ("Violets shoulder length blonde hair, hung sleek and perfectly straight", anyone? Oh, and "What better place to start then wiping out both governments" is a question, while "then" is an adverb, not a conjunction. And you can't answer "But WOULD Hermione actually ask for it?" with "Yes, she COULD.") but, for the most part, you did your homework well.
I'd honestly prefer less (ab)used lines than
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September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love that as a fellow Aussie I get to read this the moment you update. :)
What can I say? How about - LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! I so didn't want this to end. I wondered if the myserious female was going to make another appearance. Wanted Hermione to officially put her in her place but Draco sorting her out wasn't too shabby at all. Way to make Violet crumble!! LOL (oh dear, that's the wine talking) LOL As for his proposition - hot damn! er, I mean, jolly decent of him, eh what? LOL I seriously enjoyed your story and I am thrilled that you got a laugh out of my comments. LOL Please, please, please, let your muses guide you to more excitingly decadent stories. :) SOON!! Thank you for sharing.
What can I say? How about - LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! I so didn't want this to end. I wondered if the myserious female was going to make another appearance. Wanted Hermione to officially put her in her place but Draco sorting her out wasn't too shabby at all. Way to make Violet crumble!! LOL (oh dear, that's the wine talking) LOL As for his proposition - hot damn! er, I mean, jolly decent of him, eh what? LOL I seriously enjoyed your story and I am thrilled that you got a laugh out of my comments. LOL Please, please, please, let your muses guide you to more excitingly decadent stories. :) SOON!! Thank you for sharing.