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for The Guardian of Slytherin

by MariaTeresaQuintanar

person KellyJCR
schedule September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahh you have appeased my instant gratification. Its 8:00 am in Florida and as I left my review for chapter 23 the rest were posted. I loved it although sad to see it over as I do love your stoies. Nice way to handle Ron. Glad to see you kept with the integrity of Hermiones situation. It would have been wrong for them to condemn Ron after all Hermione had went through to save them. I loved the ending the sorting hat was a brilliant idea. I shall wait oh so patiently for your next story. Til next time. Well done!!!
schedule September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Was not expecting that kind of ending...I like it thou. Great story...who would have thought that it was the hat doing all the work. Can't wait for your next story..Happy Writing
person neelix
schedule September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Up to chapter 6 - in one sentence you use the word 'DOWER' - in the context you used it it is spelled 'DOUR'.

It's an interesting story. On to the next chapter!
schedule September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow so I disappear for a couple of days and next thing I know, the story is completely done! In a wonderful way might I say. I liked this story a lot. It was a plot line that I had never heard of. I'm not gonna lie, I was silently hoping u would toss a few lemons about Rabastan and Regulus our way! Even without that, the story was really good. I loved how you put Ginny and Flint together. It was a couple that I had never heard of before and I liked the portrayal of his character. Great story, as always, and I can't wait to read your next one.
schedule September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Short, sweet but perfect!
person Grace52373
schedule September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't reviewed at all. I just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed your story from start to finish! I also thank you for finishing it so quickly and not abandoning it! I hate when that happens!
person KellyJCR
schedule September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
First of all instant gratification is not overrated. It suits me just fine thank you very much. That being said I do believe the only question that got answered is how Regulus arrived. The light that came from Hermione suspisoisly reminds me a plot in True Blood. Please don't take that as an insult as I am a huge fan of the show as I am a huge fan of yours. If thats were this is going I couldn't be more pleased. If not thats cool too I am enjoying the ride. The Ginny scene was hilarious! Your Harry seems so busy with telling people he's sorry that I'm starting to doubt that he truely is. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!
person pickles87
schedule September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
excellent story..
it took me awhile before deciding to read your story.
i'm glad i waited though. i've had many wonderful chapters to read.
waiting for more.
she gave her life force for him..
that should make harry sick with self hatred.
too bad ron didn't see it or was that the whole purpose so he wouldn't be the whinny brat again and talking of people being selfish..
good story waiting for more.
person katiekrm
schedule September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm thinking Ron is going to meet his end soon. I can't believe the powers that be were just going to let her die! I'm glad she's ditched Harry. It's what he deserves. It's sad, but true.
person Elphaba
schedule September 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yep more questions. Betting they will be answered so I won't ask what is going on with Ron...